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Wanted to share my Nick fan-fic with you guys, seeing as how there is so little reading available in the L4D category.
Basically, it's just you and Nick, so deep in the swamp, you have yet to see anymore zombies. The others are dead, and you're both lost.... enjoy!

Chapter 1

"Niii-ckyyy..." you moaned childishly, holding up the legs of your pants to avoid having your already mud-plundered shoes get stuck any deeper as you trudged through this God for-saken swamp. Your nickname for the older man always grabbed his attention negatively. He had yet to learn, after every shrill, annoying time you used it, that your small goal was to irritate him. Possibly making him stop walking long enough to throw a fit with you so you could get some rest.

It worked like a charm~

The last syllable sent a chilling nerve through his upper back, arching it in anger. He spun one leg back, wide-eyed staring you down. "What!?" he briskly grunted under sharp breathe.

You placed your hands on your hips, threw your head back and sighed. "I'm tired.." You pouted. It truly was exhausting walking through thick mud for hours. You used almost every muscle in your obliques, abdomen and hamstrings just to keep up with the guy, not to mention his quick pace wasn't helping much.

He stared at you, irritated. He was tired too, but given the chance that you'd both last much longer waiting around, alone, in the dark of a creepy swamp filled with zombies, gators and who knows what the fuck else, he still wasn't going to place any bets on surviving. Not to mention that he honestly had no idea where he was going and what the hell laid around each bend, so trekking on didn't seem like the wisest move on his part either.

He'd truly been dealt a shitty hand.

You had worked your way over to him, avoiding eye-contact and lunked your forehead against his shoulder. As much as you had avoided physical contact with the funny asshole, in fear that you'd be pushed down getting mud in your panties, you really needed the support. A long groan vibrated against his sleeve, making a moist and warm patch under your nose.

It had been two horrifyingly long days in the misty mud. A fair amount of infected swamp folk took their chances against your's and Nick's pistols and heavy arms over the hours. He even took out a small gator that you argued was 'already dead' for hours, but nothing was as difficult to deal with than the hopeless and never ending scenery that repeated... for hours. You had remained optimistic for the time. The suit had led you for miles, granting the illusion that after a few more miles your duo would happen upon some sort of refuge through his aggressive and pissed of attitude the entire time. However, the hopelessness was starting to settle in. The feelings you never thought you would feel since you had oppressed them from the beginning of the infection were finally choking you up.

You didn't cry, you just held your breathe for a moment. The negativity swallowed itself back to the pit of your stomach, allowing a fresh breathe of air to clear up your face.

Nick nudged you up and motioned for you to keep moving. He decided that continuing forward was better than waiting around to see how much you could take before exploding. "Hey, sweetheart. It's gonna get a lot darker pretty soon, so let's find a better place to start crying, k?"

You fell for the same motivating insults.

"Wha-!? Who's crying? I just wanted you to carry me, 'sweetheart'~."
He smirked a short laugh at your mocking touch, then quickened his pace. "Let's go."

"Hey!" You yelled out, getting no where as fast as he was in the thick mud. "Nicky! Slow down, please!" He kept moving, convinced you just wanted him to stop and waste more time all over again. Your previously complaining left you with a crying-wolf scenario. He had advanced nearly 100 feet beyond your speed, leaving you with a good impression of how thick the fog was getting.

"Nick! Oh god, please stop walking! I really can't move as fast as you!" You really tried. It was like trying to move against a fast current up to your thighs with weights on your ankles. He was probably able to move so much faster with stronger legs, not to mention the muddy water only reached the tops of his knees.

His silhouette and sound were gone. Panic set in. You lifted your knees as high as you could, attempting to run. You advanced a good 50 feet quickly before locking your toes under a root and flopping face first beneath the murk. Hands flailing to pull your head and chest up, you spurted the gritty slime gasping for a clean breathe, then blindly unhooked the stuck shoe. "NIICCKK!" His name lurched from your raspy throat.

Nothing on you was dry or clean. You tried to clear your eyes with muddy hands rubbing more silt into them. You felt for your medical kit and wiped off the mud along the feel of the zipper before opening it. A torn piece of cloth was tucked in a side pocket. You fished it out carefully. Shaking fingertips wiped the thick shit away from your vision. You looked around at the unfamiliar location.

It had grown darker.

"Shit." You whispered, scanning the light between every tree for movement. You had no idea where Nick had gone, or how far he was, or if he had finally given up on you and wasn't going to come back. You really hoped that wasn't the case, then again, wouldn't he have noticed you weren't with him by now?

A nearby tree was decent leverage to pull yourself from the waters. It's warm bark was a reminder of how cold the mud was, and the oncoming night air. You stood up twice as high as your ground level and scouted for his figure. The mist and heavy foliage wasn't helping.

"NIIICKKK!!!" You called out once more. No response. You kept circling your sight, dreading your future. The heat was rising in your cheeks. The sorrow wasn't swallowing as easy this time.

A moving glow caught your attention to the right. Your breathe hitched as you intently focused on the movement, then the sudden shape of a person. "NI-!" You were yanked from your perch back into the mud. A hand held tightly around your mouth as your body was pulled under nearby roots.

Frozen in thought, muscles cringing, your eyes held wide; you finally reached down to pull out your pistol, but were quickly stopped from that as well.

"Fuckin' ___! Shhh! Calm the fuck down!" That angry whisper in your ear never made you feel more overjoyed. Your arms shook weakly as he kept his firm hold on you. "Don't. Make. A sound." His tone was incredibly serious. You happiness died as you remember the not-Nick lurking nearby. Your eyes darted back towards the glowing movement. The once lonely silhouette had become three. Three, very large and creepy figures. Your free hand subconsciously clenched the bottom of Nick's jacket, who released your free hand to grab you closer in comforting response.

The three figures carried an assortment of gear, ranging from bear traps, machetes, large hooks and cooking utensils. Their not-so-friendly persona definitely removed any thought of them being traders, or at least, normal traders. They were glancing side to side intently. They were obviously looking for something, making your eyes widen when you realized it was you. The skinnier of the trio paused and began sniffing the air. Like an old hound dog, his nose angled towards your location. Nick eased you lower into the mud once again. He removed his hand from your mouth, leaving you both submerged below the nose. The scrawny hound-man stalked closer to your tree, his features becoming more prominent as he grew nearer. Hideous teeth rotted between his parted lips, matched only by yellow, cloudy eyes. His skin was scarred and fly-bitten, fingers missing and now obvious shotgun in awkward hand. You held your breathe, and narrowed your eyes, praying over and over for him to not find you.

His dirty shoe stepped three feet from your face. His second foot soon matched nearby its opposite, pausing. You waited for him to bend down and look under the tree. Instead, he knelled for a moment then returned to the other two men.
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First thinking he was just going to get the other two to finish you both off, you saw a white cloth in his hand, with marks of mud from where your eyes and fingertips had been. He glanced to see if the other two were looking, then shoved it down the front of his pants. You blinked heavily in astonishment, the creeper scurried off towards the other two who had moved a good hundred feet upwind from you both.

More than ten minutes had gone by before Nick gave you the 'go-ahead'. You both crawled out from the cold mud onto the higher land the creeper once stood on. Your pruney fingers weren't not as bad as the pale, numb markings left by your socks around your ankles. You could barely stand on your feet since the adrenaline died out. You lied, eyes closed, relaxed against the grass and moss. The suit sat against the guardian tree, sighing in just as much relief as you. Silence road on for a short while. The cricket and frog tune hummed in the misty air like an old movie. It was a pleasant sound that you hadn't experienced at the start of your swamp adventure. So many zombies lingered around, most of the common wildlife migrated from the infection. It had been a while since you both had seen any zombies, by now you figured you were so far from any old town that there wouldn't really be any.

"Hey. ___, you awake?" Nick's sudden voice broke your train of thought.

You sighed, "Yeah, barely."

He shifted his legs, not continuing the response for a long moment. You could feel him thinking. He had a strong energy about him, it's probably what kept him alive and going so far. You'd never know what was on his mind when looking at him, he had quite the poker face. Stern and serious on common occasion, only revealing his true feelings when he allowed them. This was one of those rare moments he had his guard down, and it struck you curious. You sat up on your elbows.

"You know Nicky, usually when someone asks if someone else is awake, they plan on making a follow up remark. I mean, unless you just wanted to know if I was slee-"

"I'm sorry for leaving you behind, stop calling me 'Nicky', shut the fuck up and goodnight." He removed his muddy jacket, loudly shook it out, rolled it up and used the clean inside as a pillow, turned away from you.

You just stared, registering his very blunt sentence. You bit your lips back from a giggle that would eventually lead into a response... then an argument. Layed back down, you contemplated snuggling up behind the man to piss him off, but figured it best to just enjoy his 'peaceful' company and get some sleep.
>> No. 160
Chapter 2~

It was morning, or so you thought what with the faint glow of light bleeding through the thick overcast and Spanish moss overhead. Your eyes had slowly opened, un-sticking the lashes that had adhered from the muddy adventure the night before. You brushed your hand lazily down your face, subconsciously dusting away the dried particles and clots that stuck to your eyebrows, cheeks and nose. You wouldn't even bother with your hair.

Once more alert, you glanced to see if your partner was still snoozing. Instead, an open can of beans met your face. The old, rusty tin and strange label made you wonder if it actually outlasted its shelf-life. With slight grimace, you pulled it closer for better inspection. The brown goopey mush with what appeared to be chunks of beans stared back. It seemed... edible. A frown furrowed at the corners of your mouth as you pictured what it would taste like.

"Sorry princess, did you want the casserole instead~?" Nick mockingly sympathized while stooped at your ear level.

"Yes?" You pleaded, a sorry smile gracing below your puppy-dog eyes as you gazed up at him.

He smiled back, just as pathetic, then threw a rotting opossum carcase in front of you. "Eat up." You nearly gagged as you clutched the sacred beans close to your face, scrambling backwards on the slick mud.

"NICK! What the- did you kill it!?" He seemed insulted.

"Um, no. I do not 'game', sweetheart. One of your hill-folk buddies must have dropped it last night."

"And you had the balls to pick it up?!"

He smiled. "It was worth it."

You glared sharply through his smug persona, unable to come up with anything to retort against him. "... dick." You muttered as you turned away to strap your gear on. Not a moment after retrieving your first aide alongside your can of mystery food did his index finger creeped over you shoulder to pull out a scoop of your beany goop. You turned to watch, disgusted, as he slid it in his mouth and mooshed it around his cheeks before swallowing.

"Don't worry, precious. It ain't poisoned." He clinked the can with his fingernail, discarding the few remains that clung to his appendage before sauntering ahead. "And try not to get left behind this time, will ya?" He smirked.

"Yeah yeah...." You shuffled your carry-on weight then followed the dapper con-man once again.

More hopeless hours crept bye. The scenery had yet to change. If you weren't mistaken half the time, you'd be sure you were wandering in circles. You thought you could handle the waiting, the walking, the endless silence and following.

You couldn't.

"Nicky!" You yelled out, irritated. His stroll halted as he turned back, eyes narrowed in displeasure with that name. You got his attention, but didn't really know what to say.

You stood there.

".... I'm waiting." His impatience broke your nerve even more, you bit your lip, fearing you wouldn't come up with anything to say that would change something. His eyes lost yours. He turned away and kept walking.

"Uh, I bet you! I bet you I can find a way out of here! I bet my whole wallet! Credit cards, cash and all!" He stopped.

"You think cash would get me anywhere these days, sweetheart?" He turned back with the most faint devilish smile. "Throw in your first aide and the clothes off your back, then I'm in." Your heart dropped. Was he being serious? Would he really just leave you with nothing if you were wrong? He must have been bluffing; just trying to get you to shut up. You sucked it up as hard as you could, and remained strong in your presence. He obviously was trying to weaken you back to his little tag-along. No more.

"Okay." His hidden surprise was almost noticeable. "Same deal from your end."

"Sure, Princess. You lead the way for 3 hours-"

"5."

"4."

"5."

"Okay, fine. 5. Wouldn't make a difference anyways. You have 5 hours to find some sort of route out of here, if not an actual difference to our beautiful scenery, or you're strippin down for me, babycakes."

"Ditto... Nicky~." He smirked. It was a side of you he hadn't been expecting to see, and he was enjoying it. If you weren't able to leave this shit hole, at least he could have some entertainment.

"After you." He dramatically lured his hands to accentuate your direction. Head held high, you marched past him, throwing him a sideways glance to mark your dominance. That coy smirk he was developing grew. "Don't get too cocky, ____. It won't look good when you're naked."

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Your pace whilst leading was much quicker. Or, it could have just been that Nick was silently following at your slower pace and it just seemed like you were faster. Whatever the case, you had but 4 hours left to come across anything to get you both out of this mess.

You started to regret even making the bet, whether you both survived or not would have been decided, but you just put yourself in a position that could possibly leave you stranded. No matter how friendly or comfortable you made yourself around your companion, you were probably not willing to trust him in a situation where he could benefit more greatly than yourself.

"This is nice. I would have chosen this direction too." his words fluttered through your ears like you were on some happy road trip. Then it dawned on you that you had taken the lead only to walk in the same path that Nick had already drug you along. You held your flustered face from his view and jumped the next small bank left, towards more trees and mud, but not the same trees and mud that he would have gotten you lost in if he was leading. "This way's nice too, I suppose." He smiled on with his cheesy persona.

"Why thank you, Nicky babe~! You inspired it." a small, scoff of laughter blew past his lips at your mocking touch.

Another hour passed. The lighter gray hues to the thick, gnarly cloud lines above were succumbing to the more black pigment of the night. It was difficult to deal with a lack of sunlight, let alone moonlight day in and day out. The small amount of food that you both carried wouldn't last more than 2 more days. It was becoming clear that you should find some sort of exit or way out soon. There's no way 2 people could be lost in the swamps for this many days and NOT find any sort of sign of freedom; unless you'd been wandering in circles.

"Nicky-er Nick?" You slowed down to converse with the quiet man.

"... hmm?" His response was solemn, and lazy. He sure was enjoying being the follower for the time being.

"Have you ever seen a map or picture that showed how big these swamps are? I mean, just anywhere at random?"

".... nope, can't say I have, sweetheart." He smiled as though he was lying, or only wanted you to think he was lying, so you'd get more upset. You stared through the look, trying your best to fish out which angle he was playing at. He just kept smiling.

It was more painful than being shot.

"Goddamn it." You sighed and kept walking. No matter how much of a dick he was, you were only delaying yourself.

Another hour passed. It was dark, and the waters and become much cooler. You had but 2 hours left to make a dent in this escapade before turning your supplies and drawers over to the man in the suit. His patience and taunting smile irked you. You started to understand how irritated you must have made him while following his pace. It wasn't much fun being leader of a duo in a hopeless adventure. Let alone being a leader with their life on the line in your case.

You had pretty much decided your fate when losing your cool those hours back, but kept walking forward. You looked up from your pensive state and paused. A glimmer of golden light shown through the dense shrubs on the left. You drew closer to make sure you weren't seeing anything; and yet a few more glowing orbs shimmered from the darkness.
>> No. 161
You jumped through the bushes. Luck was finally on your side as you stepped over each branch and raced towards your freedom. Just a few paces left before claiming your victory over your subordinate.

You fell.

The ground grew mushy and caved in to the waters a few feet below you in the dark. It was much deeper water than previous areas, and startled you. Shriek, you grasped at the nearest ground, which gave way under your hands as well. A sturdy branch met your fingers, allowing you to pull yourself up a bit, when a very sharp pain struck your leg.

The feeling was so intense, you lost the air to scream. The pain clenched once again, piercing the holes already made. You turned back, seeing the tail of your scaley predator slap the water as he attempted to pull you in. "Oh god...." You gasped, the skin of your leg slowly being shredded from his pulling.

*KRAKOW *

The water splashed on the back of your head as the pulling stopped. You just stared at where you felt your leg dieing.

"____! Hey, snap out of it, kid! Are you alright!?" Nick was crouched near your leg, holding your shocked face against his hand. You didn't say a word, but the tears started welling up. "Aw shit."

You screamed out, flailing your good leg, afraid to move the bad. Nick pulled you up onto shore, holding your mouth shut. "Listen! I'm gonna fix your leg up best I can, but you have to stop screaming, okay?" You nodded through a red and salty face, then lied back, holding your hands up to shield away from the pain.

Nick stuck his flashlight into a nearby branch, lighting his work area. Your leg was still intact, but had large holes and torn muscle. You'd need stitches and lots of anti-biotics, which he wasn't able to preform. He took out the bandages, ointment and his canteen. You hissed into your hands; he poured the water slowly over each hole, cleaning out the mud and filth. The ointment stung like hell, but you still held back from screaming. He smirked at your candor. "You know what?" He asked, wrapping the bandages around your torn leg.

"What." You sniffled, hands pressed against your face.

"This scenery almost cuts as being different."

You looked out from behind your trembling fingers at the lights around you. A good 2 dozen fireflies trotted along the thick air, glowing like tiny lanterns. You felt a warmth drape around your shoulders as Nick placed his jacket on your back.

"I guess you win... there's my first aide" he pointed at your funky leg. "And here's my clothes." He patted your shoulders before offering you a hand up. "Let's sleep a little further from your new patch of gator pals."

You felt awful. Not only had you led Nick on a wild goose chase, you just used up his aide, his canteen, and now had him deal with your injury by moving even slower. Was he ever really going to ditch you?
He turned back at you, waiting for a response. "Well, can you walk?" He seemed genuinely worried.

"Ah... It's just a flesh wound!" You joked, blushing, obviously lying through your pain.

"Just.. come here." Nick scoffed, motioning for you to straddle his back. You frowned at the idea of causing any more grief for the poor guy.

"I'll be fine, Nicky, really!" Your fake smile said it all as you attempted to hide the limp from your horrible gator bite. "I don't want to put you through the trouble."

He peered over his irritated rouse.

"Fine. Your fat ass would be too much to handle anyways."

You gasped and blushed ferociously. "WHAT!?"

"You heard me. You really think I could carry all that?" He smirked while glancing down your body. You marched angrily over in your pathetic limp and crawled onto his back, roughly.

"Deal with it!" You remarked, pulling at his hair.

"Gladly, princess." He scoffed, holding you up as you went along. It didn't take you more than a moment to realize his plot and how you fell straight into it.... curse your womanly ways.
>> No. 172
uh. this is a parody right?
>> No. 177
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I'll never understand people's fascination with these types of stories.
>> No. 178
This actually had me switching between laughing and going "Aaaaw..", It's very cute.

I believe my inner fangirl is in love with this.
>> No. 203
>>177

Yeah. It's pretty retarded.
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the fuck am i reading
>> No. 334
I've searched the internet far and wide and, as to my knowledge, this is the only Left 4 Dead 2 *character*Xyou fic I've come across. Perhaps I am interested in this solely for that fact but, either way, I eagerly await more. Although I do agree you have taken quite a gamble posting it here. Perhaps another site maybe more suitable, but if you were to post the continuation elsewhere, please be considerate enough to mention where.
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ok...
>> No. 512
>>177
Like any other fanfiction, this sub-genra can get abused by idiots, too. If you want somre really nice ones, Marty has a few that are downright beautiful. Okay, so they're mostly, if not all smut. Donesn't matter - it's still TONS better than this.
>> No. 617
>>512

Link?

(I was lurking around the TF2 Class/You thread and been taking notes. Was severely tempted to write my own after this...uh...is 'travesty' too harsh or too nice a word?)
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