>>5 Yeah, it's about fictional characters, but is it a fanfic? No, it's a list of sentences. Is it well-written? No, it's full of cliches and purple prose; "crystalline droplet", "touch as light and soft as a feather made of silk", "The absoluteness, the depth of feeling that Spy saw reflected in his lover's blue-steel eyes". The list goes on. >>7 You do realise, I hope, that this board is 18+ and if you're a 'teenage chickie with a metaphorical hard-on for guy-guy stuff' you can get banned for posting here? And you're certainly not helping your own case, anon, by using 'yaoi'... I guess the word filter is still broken. And re: fanfic is serious business, maybe my last post sounded a bit rant-y. But now I'm sober and this 'fic' is still crap, and I'm calling it out as such.