I only caught one grammatical mistake (it's vs. its), but otherwise, it looked fine. I think this is one of those instances where perhaps it would have been better to release a Garry's Mod version of MTP.AVI, rather than a fanfic. (Sort of like day four.wmv or BEN.wmv). Or, as another alternative, have one of the cast members find this as a film reel. Like, after the Director was assassinated. Then you could dive into a pool of sweet, sweet nightmare fuel. Daisy, Daisy, give me your answer, do...