Yay! Dove! Ok, so its a fluff piece with Spy and Soldier, and Soldier being an ass rather than Spy. ... I think I can see where you're going. You wanted to crush Soldier's fond memories with the harsh realities of war? I kinda... would like to see that. And Soldier / Spy messy make outs aside, that would be interesting to see. Technically, fine, don't think there was anything overtly out of place, whole thing read well, so you were good! Mael