You know, I skimmed this, and it seems like a fic from any other site, except with modified names and a few sentences redone to fit the tf2 universe, kind of. notice theres no real description of any of the characters such that they match up to their TF2 semblances. The only things modified are some of the speech, like DUMKOFF. This seems really out of place, and male pregnancy always makes me think of the "omgkawai im so awesome and underage" sort of people.