[How are you able to do that 'quote the previous comment' thing with the numbers like this: > > 1 (as an example)?] 'Till then, I'll do it this way: >>5 All I can say is 'all in due time'! I am a fan of fluff and sexiness, so I'm going try working that in there at some point. Any specific details or happenings you'd like to see specifically? >>6 Awe, I'm sorry to hear that, I'm personally a huge fan of the sadistic scientific Medic. Perhaps I could bring some other side of his personality out just for you though. And YES! I recently had to draw Medic smooching Archimedes too. It's adorable and heart warming. >>7 As stated previously (at the top of my first entry), it was sitting in the workshop for a while and is still there untouched by my grammar Nazi friends. I have had a couple friends read through it before I stuck it on here and they didn't have much to say about my use of past and present tense. Admittedly though, I must say I do have problems with my past and present tense and I'm sorry it hurt your grammar Nazi mind. Would you like to Beta it for me? Or do you have any tips to give in ways of fixing it? A critique on your criticism (coming from a Visual Arts major) is to give helpful tips on how the person would be able to fix the issue you've found. You can't just dump a comment without giving them a way out, well... You can, but it's just frustrating. I don't see how it's childish either so I'd appreciate it if you could expand on your selective choice of wording. Thank-you! >>8 That is the greatest. That also made my day. Thank-you.