>>4 Its surprisingly not. But it is quite restricted and would take a long time to empty a bladder - also, if he is angling his penis down, the erection does not obstruct the urethra to the bladder as much. That there is my kind of porn *laughs* I don't like it. Personally, I find the idea of masturbation with a urine soaked anything to not be that fun. Then again, urine is an irritant for me, so he would be itching like crazy. So lets go through the more technical stuff. Enjoying throwing piss at people =/= a fetish. That is a sign of mental illness. You should be indicating he finds it more sexually exciting. He likes how it sits on their clothes, the smell, whatever. Then it becomes a fetish. Does he find the Scout to be attractive and he would love him to be there as his piss pig? Mention it! Does he want to mark him like an animal? Make him his? Then we are going to get something more interesting. Humping or fucking is a weird phrase - just stay with the latter there. Have him imagine its his prey. That would make most men horny! The writing itself is solid, and not too porny for me. Otherwise, its a solid bit of fic. Watersports are not my cup of tea, per se, but hey, to each their own. Ill just wait till your next one!