This was pretty well written. Would have liked to see the fic around it. However, and mostly to the other commenters, Scout is not a teenage boy. He's in his 20's (and most likely a virgin) but he's probably wanked it before. I don't think this is Scout's first reaction to stimulation, I think this is his reaction to being chained to a wall and raped. To author: You can't gasp through grinding teeth. Also you can't kiss someone's jugular (unless you're Medic).