>>5 Jeez Drillbot, I see you around this board and every single time you sound like a 5 year old spoilt brat (I was going to insert a few more choice words here but decided to moderate myself). Way to make the writers feel welcome! >>1 If I may offer some concrit, I like your characterisation of Soldier, especially the Disciplinary Action bit made me lol. However, you jumped to the sexytimes soldier a bit too fast if you ask me. Try to take things a bit slower for immersion's sake