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HAHAHA! Might I say, first thing's first, that my MOST FAVORITE THING about this is how Soldier's logic actually WORKS? I thought that was a very nice touch, that this "team building exercise" wasn't just an excuse for a circlejerk... it was an actual team building exercise, with REASONING behind it that made SENSE. I cracked up so hard whenever Soldier opened his mouth. That was wonderful.

And I love how you gave everyone attention with the porn. You flitted around the circle, showing everyone's reactions and how they were enjoying it, without focusing on any "main pairing" (even if one eventually focused on themselves). I appreciated that, since characters like Demoman get so little fanfic love.

Quite enjoyable overall. Thank you for writing it!