> 20 - 23 I just...man, I..you guys made me 'baw' like a lost baby sheep. To have Dove the Unoriginal, give me praise and to convince me to keep writing? Oh man. That was pretty powerful - you're one of my favorites on this board. And Mimi, thank you for all your kind words. I'm not fishing for any kind of praise, or compliments, my last post was truly how I fel about this story...but now I'm sitting down at a computer in the office at our apartment complex, and I'm able to truly revise and edit. I'm managed to secure myself a beta, and now I'm going to bust out the NEW first chapter of 'What You Thought You Wanted'. Oh and Dove...? Feel free to idea-jack me anytime. I love your stuff, especially your Solly x Sniper x Engie fanfic. I woner if it's polite to ask you guys if I could add you to my MSN...