>>24 >>25 Holy crap, you guys are detectives! Bravo! Open and shut case too. Damn it though. I missed the idioms and colloquialisms. But then, that is why I only asked rather than asserting the idea as truth. I wasn't entirely certain but the lack of grammar really made my head spin. (Of course, that said, I have a tendency to fuck up grammar on the first or second go around and then I have to edit the run-ons down to more manageable parcels. But that is what editing is for.) And after looking at her account, I'd say another reason for her angry attitude stems from the fact all of these characters are ones that she and her boyfriend RP together. To personal of a connection to take criticism lightly, as it feels like an attack on her and her beloved. Vickie, when you're officially eighteen I sincerely hope you come back (or if you fudge your birthday that they let it slide.) Please take some of this criticism to heart, even if not all of it was polite. People don't delurk to respond if what they read didn't evoke a strong feeling in them. Wouldn't it have been so much worse if all you had gotten was dead silence and nothing else? Because every one who read it took one look and then shrugged as they went on to some other webpage? Trust me, you reached out and touched us. Just don't dismiss what was said because it might have stung a little. Alcohol sanitizes the wound but it doesn't do so gently. spamming of curse words stemming from the popular teenage rebel mentality I admit, I swear like a sailor IRL. That's the main reason I swear so much in my fiction. Not a good excuse, just sayin'. p: Also, ABSOLUTE TANGENT TIME! I wanted to mention that Scandal Savage is from the Secret Six, a DC comic, since I kind of forgot earlier somehow. I blame sleepiness. If you love TF2, you might enjoy it very much. Secret Six is a bunch of supervillain mercs who have had and often still have horrible personal lives. Plus, Scandal is one of the few openly acknowledged lesbians in the DC universe and her relationship with Bane is both heartwarming and hilarious (yes, motherfuckin' BANE who BROKE BATMAN'S SPINE ONCE. BANE IS ALSO AWESOME. He's kind of like Heavy, actually.)