Erm...no intentions of interfering your glorius discussion, but: I had read it like the OP intended it. So for me, it was clear what Scout was doing, at least "emptying onesef" stands more for urinating than orgasm for me. Plus the Scout's accusion of Snipes being a pervert also would indicate something off the track. Something Scout experiences as perverted; given that he usually is pictured as that cheeky boy who happens to have a vivid libido , not exactly straight in the chan but also not that often into fetishes, Snipers indicated love for urin and urination would of course disgust Scout. Note to the side: Devil in your hands has only brought us Snipes and his fetish so far, if the OP says the story inspired him to write those lines, he surely sticked to the idea already given. Though, dear OP, the lack of background information makes it difficult to find into the siuation described. Oh, just noticed: Sniper is stating that Scout would not last forever; the boy did not have even the slightest of erections ( soft cock) when that was said. Surely there is stuff to improove, but don't nail the OP down for not managing to get the picture he intended to paint.