Warning for homosexuality on a gay porn site raises a red flag to me; emoticons on top, this is age-bait for sure. Also, one thing the other commenters haven’t mentioned: “N-No.†“S-Soldier!†“W-What’re you getting’ at [...] “S-S-Soldier, I’m…†Stop with the damn stuttering. This isn’t an anime. Have you ever heard Engineer stutter in the game? No. Actually, have you ever heard anyone speak like this? Engineer has a low, rough voice, he speaks calmly even under fire, and he’s a mean motherhubbard. Please try to keep him in character also when writing his dialogue.