DEATH OF A SNIPER by Hops (I don't beta, or know how to. Herp and sorry and derp.) Alright, guys, his is a lot more tangible then all the rest of my shiet. I hope you enjoy it. :8 He was a child. I cannot tell you all of the details, but I can tell you what I know, which is more then most. To an outsider, they didn't seem like friends. To our team, they were invaluable. Not just to us but to each other. I would hear them talking to each other. It was listless and desperate at the same time, their conversations. After the sirens, they couldn't be found very far from each other. Oh, thank you. Anyway, they never spoke in front of us. Not to each other, I mean. The Scout would never stop talking, or boasting, I should say. Always shouting about how his brothers were going to worship him when he got home, how he'd be the pride of his family. Sniper would never react much, he'd be talking to the Engineer about tweaking his scope. In the moments I caught them alone, however, was when their friendship was truly brought into the light. Out in the Sniper's van, they'd share drinks and cigarettes, and they'd share stories of growing up with fathers and father figures who never approved or cared. I found this, personally, very touching. ...I see, I will keep my personal sentiments to myself. The Scout had had several brothers, I understand, growing up. The number varied each time he spoke of them, I imagine he counted friends, cousins, any young man who got close to him as a brother. The attention he craved from a father seemed to have been satiated to some extent by them. However, his mother, whom I also believe is a very attractive woman, had many suitors who damaged the Scout. The Sniper, on the other hand, appears to have had a very lonely upbringing, his father dissaproving, his mother supportive, though silently. With some very delicate exploration, I discovered his father had given him his first rifle at the age of ten, and expected him to become some sort of...Cowboy. I believe that there had been encuragement when the Sniper showed skill with the weapon, perhaps until an unfortunate incident with a neighbour's son. While Scout was going to a normal American elementary school, Sniper was graduating from a Military academy, moving on to try his hand at some sort of...Civilized, 'normal' job. He mentioned being a 'pencil pusher' for a time, before he went to prison. The Scout also spent time in a juvinille reformatory for killing a classmate during a wrestling match in high school. I don't have records of the Sniper's first kill, though if I was to assume, I would say he finished the job on the neighbour boy he shot as a child. From prison they were both recruited to this...No, I would never use the word 'joke'. Business, perhaps, would be the wise choice. No, thank you. No, I am not thirsty, I... ...If you insist. When I found Scout, he already had his pistol half way down his own throat. It was...Painful. Even now, comparing the two men, the Scout I met on the first day, and the Scout I found choking on a gun, it causes me great pain. When he first arrived, he was as talkative and boastful as he was every day after that in the common room. I do not shake hands, but he did not give me a choice. A true 'force of nature', haha. A break? Bon, remerci. _________________________________________ Where were we? Ah, merci. When I met the Sniper, we got along through silence. He occasionally asked for my assistance in detecting enemy spies, and I told him secrets I would not be sore for telling. He spent most of his time alone, in the begining, or with the Engineer. He and the Scout didn't start getting along until the Demoman began to share his infinite, infamous supply of mislabeled gasoline. At first they would share drinks and talk, then they did not always need the drinks to loosen their tongues, then the drinks were just there for company. The rest of this story is their talks late into the night, until the end. There was magic between them, and, to my knowledge, neither of them knew it at all. They were all they had, and I believe that is where this tragedy lies. Without understanding what they had, Sniper directed it to the morbid, leading the Scout along on a terrible journey in the privacy of his van. I knew something was wrong, the Scout's stories in the common room went further away from his American family, his mother and brothers. He became careless on the field. The Sniper, in turn, became more ferocious in his attacks, and more secluded from the rest of the team. It was subtle, very subtle, but I am a master of subtleties. What the Medic found of him...Was impossible to bring back together. Our respawn systems had been compromised with bullets the same caliber as Scout's gun. It was unthinkable, an act of treachery the opposite team would never had considered, as we had never considered harming their respawn. We knew it to be our Scout. Non...I cannot. I cannot. Oui...Yes...YES I KNOW MY PURPOSE! DO NOT THINK FOR A SECOND I DO NOT! DO YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE- _________________________________________ They had found comfort in each other, in their words, Scout looking up to the Sniper as a brother and father. The Sniper, I believe, felt the same way, as much as he could, to the Scout. The times they touched were innocent, as was their love. I believe they were brothers, perhaps, in some other life. Perhaps they will be rejoined in that life, as they were meant to be. Perhaps that is what the Sniper had wanted all along. I can almost say I am ashamed of myself for depriving him of that. I found Scout, covered in the Sniper's brains and blood, crying around the barrel of his gun. It was the worst torture to hear him scream as I pulled him from the wreckage of Sniper's corpse. I would have chosen all of the Vietnamese dungeons over that night. Vachement...A moment, S'il vous plaît. ________________________________________
This... okay i need to know, will be there more? Because i´m sitting with a big fat WHY?! in my head here and want to see more of this. Pretty, please?
Death of a Sniper part 2 ____________By Hops IT AIN'T LIKE THAT. IT FUCKING AIN'T NEVER BEEN LIKE THAT. FUCK YOU, MAN. FUCK YOU AND ALL OUR SHIT. YOU HAVE NO FUCKIN IDEA WHAT I'VE BEEN THROUGH. YOU BEEN THROUGH WHAT I BEEN THROUGH AND YOU'D BE FUCKIN DEAD, YOU FUCKIN HEAR ME? Listen, so it's liek this, alright. You fuckin LISTEN TO ME. FUCKIN READ MY LIPS YOU DEAF BLIND DUMBASS. FUCK. THIS IS HOW IT WAS. Snipes was like a FUCKING BROTHER to me, you hear that? A BROTHER. He never tried any of that faggy shit on me! If he did I woulda... Just shut the fuck up. I got no idea where the fuck you're getting your fuckin info from, but it's all fucking WRONG, YOU GOT THAT? Me and Snipes shared a beer or twenty, alright. We talked about how shitty our dads were, thats fucking IT. OH YEAH? YOU TRY HAVIN' YOUR MOM GETTIN FUCKED BY THE FUCKIN ENEMY. THAT'S PRETTY FUCKIN SHITTY. FUCKING GAD, YOU GOT NO IDEA. __________________________________ Snipes nevr tried to talk me into SHIT, alright? All he ever said was he wished he could be happy, that's fuckin' it. I mean, his dad fuckin hates him, it was pretty bad for him, alright? I mean, sure, my dad kills me all the fuckin' time, but it's not like he, you know, grew up with me or whatever. I mean I grew up with him. You know what? WHAT THE FUCK EVER. I AIN'T EXACTLY WORRIED ABOUT THAT KINDA SHIT. __________________________________ I don't like coffee, thanks anyway. Yeah, up yours too. Look, I came from a buncha guys who beat the shit outta me for fuckin fun. It got me ready for those fuckheads my mom tried to date. Served 'em fuckin' right for doin' the shit they did to me. THOSE SCUMBAGS DON'T EVEN DESERVE TO BE DEAD. They deserve to go through this SHIT I'M PUTTIN' UP WITH RIGHT NOW. ______________________ So, what, you gonna play all friendly and shit with me now? Fine, you know what? Fuckin' fine. At leas tthe info you get from me will be the fuckin truth, not what some French queah is tellin you. Snipes was a brotha, he knew the shit I'd been through. He listened and talked and shit. It was all normal and shit, a real couple of fuckin sob stories. He just wanted out. He wanted out of it all, this stupid fuckin run around you been havin us do these last four fuckin years, his dad beatin on him and his ma just standin' there. Shits hard to go through, man, but you don't know shit about it. I can smell the fuckin 'lovin faily home' on you. You fuckin reek of good parenting. You know what? I wish I went with him. Where ever Snipes is at, he's happy. DON'T FUCKIN TOUCH ME. DON'T EVEN FUCKIN' LOOK AT ME. NO, FUCK YOU, WE'RE DONE. ____________________________ Gad....Gad damn I miss him... Somethin' in my eyes... He wanted me to go with him. I wanted out as much as him, and we'd go together, and man, we'd have been happy. He said death was like sleepin'. We'd wake up and be somewhere where all the shit we'd been through and done wouldn't matter to nobody. I've killed people, man. Real people, people outside of the Team. I'm gonna be in prison for the resta my life. There ain't no gettin away from that. Snipes, too. He killed a couple people. He said he got paid for some, others he just did to pass the time or some shit. He was a good guy. Messed up, but ain't we all. I'd give anythin'. Anythin' to be back in his stupid, rank van, tossin' back a beer and laughin. There just ain't nothin to laugh about now. ... ... ... Fuck...Can I go back to my cell...Please, man. I ain't in a state to talk anymore. _________________________________ He kept talkin' about some girl named Adelaide. How hot she was, how she made him feel at home or some shit. He said he'd never get to see her again, cause he'd be put back inta the slammer when you were done with him. That's what got me listenin to him. Cause I'd be tossed back here too when we were done. He said "You can't wash away sins by sinnin for the man." Whatever the fuck that means, it hit me that I ain't never gonna see my brothers or my ma again. Even if I could I don't want them to know about all this shit. I don't want them to see me. Snipes had a way. It was gonna be me and him and this Adelaide, and we were gonna have this perfect life, and it was gonna be... Doesn't matter what it was gonna be, it ain't never gonna be anythin now. ... I...He made it alright to be messed up. Soldier tried to do that shit, but, like, Lord fuckin knows that guy was callin' kettles black left right n' center. Snipes didn't try to pretend he wasn't fucked up. He was just quiet, that's all. He didn't shove his crazy down your throat like Soldier, or pretend he was all normal and shit like Spy. ... ________________________________ The...The last night we...Me and Snipes... It wasn't like he was excited or nothin', but I knew he'd found a way out. He had this smile, like he'd just found twenty bucks. He had his gun on the table. He had a hand on it. His key to that big ol' door of life. We had a couple beers without talkin' about it. We talked about stupid shit. Stupid fuckin shit that doesn't matter to nobody. He didn't ever touch me, ever. But he hugged me. It was fuckin' weird, but I couldn't...I couldn't let go. He asked if I was coming with him and Adelaide. I told him he was the best friend I ever had, even for a roohumper and we laughed. I heard him cock his gun, we were still huggin. Just befre he blew his brains out, I coulda swore I heard him say "Boom, headshot." Gad, he died in my arms. It was like...It was the worst thing I ever felt. His whole body went limp, his blood was... I-It was everywhere. There wasn't a spot that... He was gone, just like that. He was goin' to the other side, leavin' me behind. I hlped him down and laid him out. He looked peaceful for missin' most of... Then that...That fuckin' Spy showed up... He ruined everything. ____________________________________
I´m happy if i can smile again. Especially after Snipers last line.
@2 There's a bit more on the way, maybe, herp. @4 what?
>>4 Means you made me sad. Very sad. Anyway i like how good you came to write the telling style of Spy and Scout. I really came to picture in my head both talking with a nonseen person about this incident. I love interrogation scenes.