Hey there. I decided to try giving writing a shot. Constructive criticism is highly encouraged. Here you go. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Sniper crouched behind the rampart, bored out of his mind. He'd been able to pick off everyone exiting the BLU base with ease. His efficiency had been his downfall, however: the BLUs would only cross the gap between bases by going beneath the bridge. All the fighting was in the tunnels now; the whole team was down there. Heavy, Scout, Demoman, Engineer... Engineer. Just thinking about him made Sniper's heart race. He remembered what the two of them had done in the desert, free from prying eyes, and he... And he... He looked at his crotch and realized he had a massive erection. Sniper peeked over the rampart. Still nothing. Down below, he heard gunfire and explosions; up here, there wasn't anything. Slowly, he slid back beneath the wooden rampart and began to carefully unbutton his pants. His cock, half-erect, grew even as he pulled down his boxers. It was at full size by the time he had wrapped his hand around it. He thought of Engineer as he began to stroke it. He went slowly at first, remembering the delicate kiss they had shared. He sped up when he remembered Engineer bent over the hood of his car, overalls around his ankles. He went even faster as he remembered the sensation of Engineer's tongue on his cock. "Oh, fuck." It wasn't enough. He began to imagine new things: being tied to a bed and teased by his lover. Getting on his knees and sucking Engineer's cock. Bending over and letting Engineer rim him. "Oh, fuuuuck..." Sniper felt a white heat growing in his stomach. "Aaaah- aaah-" His hand went faster and he pumped his pelvis against it. His stomach muscles began to tighten. He bit his lip, and his core finally to make way for a powerful orgasm. "Oh, fuck!" After a few moments, he opened his eyes. His hand and the floor were covered in thick white streams. He sighed. Then he gasped as two legs appeared in front of him. He looked up, and the legs were joined by a torso, two feet, two arms, two hands, and a grinning face. A Blue Spy was looking down at him and smiling. "Oh, shit."
I would love to see what happens next.
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1) Sniper popping a sudden awkward boner in the middle of battle forms the premise of your story (as well as a delicious tease for upcoming porn), so I would encourage you to go into this part with more detail. Is this a common occurrence? How does the Sniper feel about being so unprofessional on the job, even if he's thinking about his lover? 2) I don't quite buy the Sniper being willing to have a wank out in the open like this. Besides Spies, he also has to watch out for Demomen, Soldiers, Pyros, Scouts, and other Snipers. (Yes, they're currently not contending topside on account of RED Sniper being awesome, but wouldn't they at least take a look every so often just to see if it would be worth taking the risk?) 3) Where is the BLU Sniper? I wish you detailed how RED Sniper established his dominance more, because even if the "Meet the [Class]" videos show the REDs being unilaterally superior to BLU, gameplay and other supplementary material suggest instead that the Administrator tries to ensure that teams are more evenly matched. In-game, we have mechanics like autobalance and team scramble (and rage-quitting) to try to keep the two sides more equal; I tend to assume that this holds true in-story as well (except in the case of the canonical teams because they're the cream of the crop).
Thanks, guys! I'll definitely continue this, sooner or later. It's always nice to hear how I can improve.