Team Fortress 2 and its characters belongs to Valve AN: I know its choppy in the first bit and i can rework it if needs be ,was supposed to be a gift. In afanfic due to later chapters including adult scenes. --------------------------- Sparks Cold. Freezing bone chilling cold. His mind slowly waking as his eyes crept open. Naked and covered in his own dried blood he lay there. His cheek was sore from the wet concrete he passed out on ,Scout groaned quietly. He was almost used to the chill in his prison. Attempting to roll over he was met with a sore ache burning from his stomach ,flinching as his head spun making Scout gasp for breath. His back could stand up to the blows but there were nasty purple bruises along the inside of his young body. Scout hadn't eaten for two beatings now ,though the very thought of putting anything in his mouth again made him sick. Shivers rippling across his thin frame and forcing him to wake up to the pain. Finally getting his bearings Scout crawled over to his water bucket and splashed the freezing water onto his face. Least he could do is get that Spy's scent away from his nose. Leaning against the wall of the filthy cell Scout let out a sad sigh while looking at his bloody and bruised feet. His toenails were taken from him during his 'Interrogation' ,Scout always could out run his problems before. Now he couldn't see how he could ever run again. It had been the last day of combat before BLU was shipped out of Coldfront and onto BLU's next base. Medic made a huge push through RED's lines with Soldier and they captured RED's facility. Cheering and smiling all letting their guard down Scout couldn't remember past checking RED's meeting room for the RED Spy. A whiff of a cigarette and a sudden pinch to his neck of a syringe and he fell into darkness. Waking up in a bare cell didn't settle with the Scout very well. With his team packing up an anxious to leave the freezing base even before the fight it dawned on him that no one was coming for him. With Scout screaming an banging on the cell door Spy soon lost his patience taking all his pent up rage out on the young man. At first it was just for intelligence and resupply positions but Spy soon ran out of things to squeeze from the boy. Scout soon was quiet as RED Spy called in Soldier and Demo for assistance. Probably the dumbest question Scout ever said as he lay on the concrete was when the men started taking off their belts and stared down at him with hungry eyes. They took his virginity that night and many more after that. Soon though Demos visits stopped (probably due to his guilt) and Spy's just turned into sick torture and play for the frenchmen's knife skills. Soldier's were just as rough an intense ,breaking Scouts jaw with his fist if he heard as much as one whimper from him as he pressed into Scout. The thoughts of it all making Scout dizzy again ,he was going to break soon. Soft footsteps echoed from the hallway making Scout tense up in fear before relaxing as they got closer. The footsteps were in step with a familiar squeaking sound of rubber against rubber. RED's Pyro ,the only person on the base who remembered to feed the Scout ,even fill his bucket with water when Spy wasn't around. The slot in the door opened an a rubber gloved hand pushed a tray of warm soup and bread into his cell. "Hey...Hey thanks man." Scout croaked. The smell of food and claws raking inside his belly pushed his head to the side allowing himself to eat. "....." Scout crawled ,over to his gruel and started on the stale bread. ".....Hout?" Scout answered through a mouthful "Yea mumbles?" "Hie munno eff his mill halp ...buh" Pyro lifting his mask to just enough to uncover his mouth "I...brought you a spare blanket i had." Scout was taken aback as the grey but warm looking standard issue RED blanket was pushed threw the cell door. His clothes were torn from him within the first day ,a luxury he wouldn't pass up. Grabbing the wool and wrapping it around his scarred shoulders ,holding himself and coiling into it. "Wow ,Pyro thanks ,but how'd you get this past Soldier?" Scout shuffling over and leaning against the cool steel door. Pyro chuckled and said softly "It'll be our secret I guess." Soldier said being cold built character and Scout was just being weak. Scout for what felt like the first time ever let a small smile creep onto his face. "You remind me of my teams Pyro you know. He used to love having campfires with me ,heh." "Well if Soldier ever tires of you and lets you out I wouldn't mind a warm fire." Rubber stretching an the scuffling of boots could be heard outside his door as the RED stood up with the empty tray an bowl that Scout had licked bare. "Heh ,yea... if." Scout replied with a shaky voice. Pyro slid the slot closed again and sighed as he walked back up the hallway and upstairs. Scout still swimming around in his head of happier times back with BLU ,not noticing the soon approaching heavy footfalls of Soldier towards his cell. --------------------------
Is it bad that I find it OOC for these fics where Scout gets captured by (insert team here) who turn out to be a bunch of torturous rapists. Is it bad that I find these stories tiresome? Was the rape really necessary? Yes, the mercenaries are a group of people who will cheerfully murder you but I just can't see them jumping at the chance to rape someone. Even an enemy. These things are never well-written and I feel they are there just for the shock value, only so many authors have done this "Scout gets tortured and raped" thing it's no longer shocking it's just tiresome. It feels like those movies that have gorn for the sake of gorn, and trade in better writing so they can insert their gorn everywhere. Or maybe I'm wrong. Maybe there is nothing wrong with ooc Scout gets tortured and raped fics. Is it just another form of glurge? Is it supposed to be like a short sex pwp? I just feel that in these stories the characters are not given the proper....respect (for lack of better word) they deserve. That these stories are just another form of turning Scout into a little uke in some girl's yaoi fantasy. That characters like Spy and Soldier are just there to fill the rape role in these stories regardless of how out of character that is for them. I'll tell you what I DO like: I like the idea of a Scout and Pyro friendship. Scout is the youngest of eight brothers so being a part of RED/BLU is not so different you just get bigger chunks taken out of you on a daily basis. Pyro is a total manchild, he is both creepy and innocent of the world around him. I can totally see Scout and Pyro bonding and spending leisure time together. Maybe even Scout teaching Pyro how to play baseball and not light it on fire.
Hello dear. My, those Soldier steps made me shiver in anticipation... You caught my attention because: Scout abuse is very sensual; the descriptions of Scout's impression in a - let's call like this - sensorial way about his environment (man, i'm a sucker for this kind of style). In my opinion, you can somewhat abuse of this way of description, hehe; even though i have a thing for extreme graphic sexual violence, it's pretty nice that you chose to hide it. If you'll make it more graphic in the next chapters, it'll be awesome, but if deep inside you want to make it as subjective as possible, i think it's a good way to work too; Pyro's interesting role (but i give you a little note: don't you find strange and unnatural that someone can smile/chuckle in such tense situation, even if the person isn't in a prisioner's position? Just sayin'). I guess my complaints, for now, are that the chapter is short and Scout's fears and pain are still kinda...shallow, i guess? Maybe you have suppressed them too much, just in a few sentences? Aaand that you didn't explore the other characters that appear in your work. Another kink inside this noncon fanfics is the exploration of the executioners. I mean, not that omg-i-am-a-rapist-and-a-torturer-because-society-was-so-mean-to-me-when-i-was-a-child crap (i think people fail horribly when trying to explain why a murderer is a murderer, for example - and not only in fanmade stuff), but a nice dive in their heads: their impressions of what they are doing, their thoughts, their day-to-day and their relationships with other teammates...these things. Good luck with your next chapters, i'm waiting. P.S.: sorry any grammar mistakes...english ain't my first language.