beep boop, I am a magic robot, and I am here to (try and) write erotic fiction. Established relationship between Engineer/Scout, set in "present day" AU. Unbeta'd, if it sucks please tell me. I don't think my accents are too good so I kept it light. Part 1/3? ELECTRO “Hey, yo, Engie. What’s up?†Scout hopped up onto Engineer’s desk and sat down. Engineer flipped up his goggles and sighed. “Well, obviously, I’m tryna get some work done. You’re sittin’ on mah blueprint, by the way.†Scout grinned, grabbing the blueprint from under himself. He rolled it into a tube and knocked Engineer on the helmet. “Long weekend coming up, ya know. Got any plans?†He leant forward into Engineer’s personal space. Engineer smiled and hummed, rubbing his stubble. He thought of the designs he had half finished, the prototypes for improved sentries and dispensers that languished in the corner of his workshop, gathering dust. But long weekends were never for work. Long weekends were a chance to do the menial, the relaxing, the small things that reminded them of once being civilians. “Sleep in. Get a hair cut. Maybe fix the TV.†“Fuck that shit. Like you’ve got any hair to cut anyway, baldy.†Scout lifted Engineer’s helmet up slightly and rubbed the sparse scalp with his thumb. Engineer chuckled and pushed Scout’s hand away, righting his hardhat in mock indignation. Scout broke into a smile and leaned forward, kissing Engineer softly. Engineer sighed and rubbed his hand through Scout’s hair. Scout pulled back suddenly. “Come out with me.†Engineer laughed. “Now why would I want to do that? There’s nothin’ out there for miles. ‘Cept the other base and I’m pretty sure it’s identical to ours.†“Not the other base, numbnuts. There’s something amazing out in the desert. Fuckin’ – you wouldn’t even guess it.†Scout poked Engineer in the chest with the rolled blueprint for emphasis. “Well, what is it then?†Engineer leaned back in his chair. “It’s a surprise. Just...fuckin’ trust me. It’ll be baller.†Engineer sighed and looked up at the ceiling. His plans for the long weekend were not important, but he was looking forward to it nonetheless. On the other hand, the base wasn’t getting any more exciting and it was true, he didn’t have enough hair for a haircut yet anyway. He fixed his gaze on the Scout in front of him and grinned. “You gonna make it worth my while?†“You fuckin’ know it.†Suddenly Scout was clambering into Engineer’s lap, making the chair lean back a bit more than it was designed for. He sat with his knees either side of Engineer, grabbing his face with both hands and kissing hotly. Scout tasted sweet and sour, like those awful energy drinks he drank all the time; Engineer slightly metallic from a cut on his tongue. Putting tools in one’s mouth was a bad habit of Engineer’s and came back to bite him sometimes. Scout rubbed his thumbs against Engineer’s stubble and moaned, moving to bite at Engineer’s ear. Engineer hissed at the sensation and rubbed his hands along Scout’s muscular back. He could feel Scout’s erection rubbing into his belly. “…How far away is it?†Scout huffed into his ear wetly. “A day, maybe. We need to get there at night though, that’s when it allllll-“ Scout stretched out the last sound as he licked the shell of Engineer’s ear. “-Goes down.†His hands started to wander to Engineer’s fly, rubbing against the coarse material. "...Alright. This had better be damn good, boy.†Engineer wanted to sound reluctant, unimpressed but it was hard with Scout palming his fat erection so insistently. “H’yeah. It’ll blow your freakin’ mind.†Scout leant back as he popped Engineer’s dick out of his fly. He tugged at the loose skin, admiring the way it slid so easily over the head, slick and already leaking. Scout dropped to the floor and spread his knees apart with both hands. Scout began to kiss up his thigh, nosing deep into Engineer’s crotch. Engineer exhaled as Scout began to kiss chastely up his dick. He paused and smiled to himself. “Maybe not as much as this, though.†Scout admitted, swallowing Engineer’s dick into his hot mouth. He grasped firmly at Engineer’s thigh with one hand, his other hand reaching up and grabbing the base of Engineer’s dick. Engineer moaned low and thrust into Scout’s wet mouth softy, Scout huffed and moved to take more of Engineer’s dick into his mouth. He sucked and tongued ruthlessly as Engineer began to grab at his hair. “Oh, fuck Scout! Damn, boy!†Engineer moaned out as he thrust into Scout’s mouth, pulling Scout by his mohawk. He grabbed Scout by the back of the skull and fucked his mouth, Scout leaning up onto Engineer’s thighs with his elbows. He pulled away from Engineer’s dick with a soft pop. “Hah, tell me you fucking love this.†He whispered harshly, tonguing the head of Engineer’s dick, making him squirm. Engineer exhaled through his teeth. “I fuckin’ love the way you suck my dick, boy.†Scout’s breathing labored, he looked at Engineer with dilated eyes and pumped Engineer’s dick with his hand. “Tell me how much you want to come in my mouth. How fuckin' much you want me to get you off.†Scout growled as he slipped Engineer’s dick into his mouth and started to suck him off again. “Scout, I want to come in your fuckin’ dirty mouth so bad-!†he exclaimed as he grabbed Scout’s hair again. Scout moaned as Engineer forced his mouth down, and Engineer came, hot and needy into Scout’s mouth. He relaxed his grip on Scout’s hair, threading his fingers though it gently as he thrust into Scout’s mouth a few times more. Engineer exhaled slowly as Scout pulled his mouth back, wiping a bandaged hand across his lips. He seem content, his eyes glazed and heavy. He rested on the balls of his feet, his back against Engineer’s desk as Engineer struggled to sit upright in his chair. “Okay, so yeah. You’re coming with me this weekend. We’ll leave Friday night, ‘kay?†Scout pointed up at Engineer. Engineer nodded slowly, weak and satiated. Scout stood up and leant forward to kiss Engineer. Engineer hummed and held the back of Scout’s head with his hands, running his fingers through Scout’s hair. “Don't pull any more out, or I'll be ugly like you.†Scout laughed as he pulled away. He ruffled his clothing back into position and adjusted his erection a little before he put on his hat and left the workshop. Engineer sighed as he looked around for something to wipe up with.
" kiss chastely up his dick." lol, nothing chaste about that. The technical stuff is decent, good grammar and spelling, all that. The actual writing was a little drab, boring. The story could use a bit of work too. I get that it's pure smut, but a little more details would have been nice. Like why are they in a relationship, how'd they get there, that sort of stuff. It's always nice to know what the rest of the team knows about their relationship (if they even know). Another thing that bothered me - i'm not sure how you could fix this - but i didn't really feel myself interested much in what this surprise could be. Maybe because Engineer didn't seem much interested about it either. Not even just the surprise, but it'd be nice to have any sort of relation to the situation period. Smut is good, when it's not the only thing a story has going for it.
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>>2 Yeah. 2 was right. People tend to think the word 'chaste' means sexual or even quick, meanwhile it means the complete opposite. Definition: "Not having any sexual nature or intention." So that's one thing to change. Another is your use of their class titles. If ctrl+F told me correctly, you use 'Engineer' fifty two times. A little excessive. If you use more 'he', I think we'd be able to tell the difference. Your diction is nice, it would just be better if you arranged your sentences a bit differently to compliment your word choice. But overall, I like it so far and would enjoy seeing what comes next. Curious about what's in that desert...
A little hesitant about the "present day AU" bit, but you're caught my attention enough that I'll read whatever follows.
In regards to this whole chaste thing... perhaps the OP was referring to Scout lightly pecking innocently up Engineer's dick. At least that's what I got out of it.
@ A person first, please sage. Second, anon already stated that chaste does not mean light, quick or innocent. look it up. GRRR, thought there was an update to this.
beep beep, after some processing, magic robot is (slightly) updated and has produced more smut. Thanks for the critique, and yes, >>6 is right I meant chaste as in like a teasing, soft kiss rather than sloppy blowjob kiss. I've tried to reduce the use of names, seems to be a bad habit. There will be more character development/non boning related interaction forthcoming, plus an extra part! Any more suggestions, please tell me. Part 2/4? The rest of the week passed by and at Friday’s end, RED had secured a glorious, hard won victory. Scout sidled next to Engineer as they walked back towards the base. He walked with his bat slung over his shoulders, Engineer lugging his toolbox by his side. Before he could comment on the day, Scout had launched into his personal blurb. “I was a-fucking-mazing today. Capped those points like a damn pimp, frickin’ pow!†He pointed his bat skyward. “We are a team ya know, it wasn’t just you out there.†He continued, unabated. “Did you even see me? I wouldn’t be surprised if you didn’t, I think I broke the speed of light. BLU’s don’t know what hit ‘em.†He swung the bat back across his shoulders casually. “Well, I know what hit you. Saw you take a head shot from that BLU Sniper. Five times was it?†Engineer smiled as he tapped his hard hat. “You could try using your brains, just once. They’re not just for makin’ the ground look pretty.†Scout exhaled dismissively, shoving Engineer in the shoulder. “Well where you all day then? Jerkin’ off behind your sentry?†“Just because I wasn’t getting blown up every few minutes doesn’t mean I wasn’t working. Do you even know what your job is? It ain’t making spare Scout parts.†“Oh wow, great advice! All this time I thought the objective was to die as much as possible.†he drawled. “Well, you’re mighty fine at that. Hell, the only thing you’re really good for is wasting bullets.†Scout started walking backwards, getting into Engineer’s face and sneered. “Tell you what, hardhat, you can tell me how to do my job as much as you like after the weekend. Cause I am fuckin’ sick of listening to you.†He slipped around to Engineer’s other side and leant in close, whispering. “Sorry. Gotta make this look right. Meet me up on the roof later, I’ve got something to show you.†With a wink, he bashed Engineer on the helmet with his bat and jogged away. “Bonk!†“Damn it, Scout!†He recoiled from the impact, his head throbbing. “You’re gonna get it later, boy!†“Fuckin’ punk.†Engineer turned around and Soldier was walking next to him, glaring at Scout as he annoyed Sniper in the distance. Engineer couldn’t help smiling, but he pulled it into a scowl as he readjusted his helmet. “He’s not easy, I’ll tell you what.†After Engineer had packed away his toolbox, he thought about how to get to the roof. He hadn’t been up there in a while, but Spy and Sniper spent enough time up there that they had installed a ramshackle ladder that rested against the power box. He looked critically at the wobbly structure, it was woeful; then again, not everyone else had multiple engineering degrees under their belts. Scout was already on top of the base as Engineer cautiously stepped off the ladder. The sun was tangerine against a black sky, RED base still shrouded in darkness before the lights came on. Scout smiled as Engineer approached him and Engineer couldn’t help smiling back. He was still annoyed about their exchange before, but he knew it was better for it to seem like they were fighting than banging. This was almost romantic, Scout wanting to watch the sun set with him. He moved next to Scout and put his arm around his waist. “Didn’t take you for this kind of man.†he said warmly, leaning in to kiss his cheek. “What? Shut up, you’re going to miss it.†Scout pulled a large spyglass out from a gym bag on the ground. He gave it to Engineer and pointed into the distance. “Look, out over there.†Engineer pulled his goggles up and put the spyglass to his eye. “What am I looking for?†“Don’t worry, you’ll see it.†He scanned the darkness, there were large mountains far away and an abandoned train track, but other than that, only sand. Their worksites were scattered around the desert, but there would be no reason to visit those, would there? Suddenly, he recoiled, blinded. He rubbed his eye and quickly refocused on that area. There was a large, bright…building, partially hidden behind an outcropping of rock. It was hard to tell what it was, but it was pulsing out coloured light intermittently. There seemed to be multiple patches of neon glowing in the darkness and sparks flying from the ground. Scout pressed his cheek against Engineer’s and pulled the spyglass to his own eye. “Yeah, looks cool, huh!†Engineer grabbed the spyglass back and tried to study what it was further. It wasn’t on fire, it wasn’t exploding, perhaps there were fireworks? The idea that it was a crashed alien space cruiser crossed his mind briefly. Suddenly, the fluorescent lights of the base came to life and he could see no more. The lights from RED and BLU base drowned out the darkness of the desert. He rubbed his eyes as he handed the spyglass back to Scout. “Before you ask, I ain’t gonna tell you what it is. Also, we’re going to need to leave soon, so get that piece of crap truck in gear and let’s go.†Engineer wanted to argue, to plead, to fuck the answer out of Scout, or beat it out of him if it came down to it. But one look at Scout’s grin told him that he would take it to his multiple graves. Engineer’s curiosity was fully piqued and Scout knew it. “Can I take a shower first?†Engineer finally sighed. “I’ll meet you there, cowboy.â€
This is brilliant, please continue!
oooooooh! This is really interesting! Do go on.