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No. 12946
I've been a thread stalker for a couple of months for a fanfic and I was wondering if there is anyone who can still make those kinds of fics now these days? If so, feel free to put it here.
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>> No. 16131
Could we please have another Medic/reader fanfiction? Pretty please?
>> No. 16133
Perhaps an extra Engineer/reader?
>> No. 16135
To those requests for more of the Heavy/Medic/FemReader, did you mean me at 107 and 147? If so, I do actually have at least three further sections in mind (as well as a Sniper/FemReader), but I've been finding it hard to get time to write.
>> No. 16136
>>189

You, or anyone else willing to write. I feel like every day, there's at least 10 different "please write me this fanfiction for free" posts, but no actual people willing to write. And I don't feel like people should even request stuff if there's no one willing to step up.
>> No. 16137
Hi, at the moment I'm working on both Scout/reader and Spy/reader fics, so if anyone's interested they should be finished soon.
>> No. 16143
>>191

I am very interested. I'm really looking forward to the Scout x Reader story. I would like to see even more of these.
>> No. 16146
>>191

I'm also on this interest train to see your stories. Nice to see this thread still being updated.
>> No. 16147
I warn both of you I'm really bad at accidentally making it a bit too story heavy so I hope it doesn't disappoint too much haha
>> No. 16149
>>189 well if that anon didn't mean you then I sure do. Holy shit those are great!!!
>> No. 16150
>>194

That's fine. I can't speak for anyone else, but even if you make it totally worksafe, or even genfic, I'd be happy.
>> No. 16151
>>196

Nah there's definitely smut, I just get way too carried away with the lead up and setting the scene. I have to make sure it's not 'one finger, two finger, three finger, DICK' so its a bit balanced now, christ
>> No. 16160
Hi, I'm new here, hopefully I'm saging correctly! I've been thinking about writing something with CBS, but I'm having a hard time getting a solid grasp on the character. Could anyone recommend some fics that feature him? They seem rare, and interest in CBSxreader fics looks to be even rarer, but iunno. I'm into it.
>> No. 16172
I would very much like to see some demoman x you. something sweet and nice.but still kinda erotic.it would be nice enough but you don't have to if you don't want to.
>> No. 16183
>>198

You are not alone. I also want to see CBS x reader stories. Unfortunately, I do knot know of any fanfics with him featured, but I really want to see one posted. I think there have been quite a few comments from people in this thread that want to read a CBS story too.
>> No. 16187
I have a Medic/You I just finished if anyone is interested.
>> No. 16192
@skillet 747 are you still there?? I'm interested!
>> No. 16215
I'm not sure if I should ask this here, but I have a Scout x Reader story that has been sitting in my document file for over a year, and I need a beta reader to edit it. It's part 2 of a story that I submitted here over a year ago, and I accidentally saged it. Is anyone willing to help?
>> No. 16216
Looks to be pretty dead here
>> No. 16219
<<204

I do plan on submitting something here soon, I just need it to be edited a few more times.
>> No. 16228
*pops out of now where* I thought of doing a sniper x reader soon, so I hope you guys are ready~
>> No. 16229
*pops out of now where* I thought of doing a sniper x reader soon, so I hope you guys are ready~
>> No. 16231
Here you go! I hope you guys like~ Sorry if it sucks, first time doing a Team Fortress 2 fanfic~ :V

Here it is as well for...I dont know~ http://archiveofourown.org/works/3857239

and also, your name is Dagger since your weapon is knifes and stuff~

Enjoy!

.....

You were in Sniper’s nest, you mostly relaxed there when you wanted to be alone. You sipped your coffee and watched Scout outside as he was just running round and playing with his bat. You had a soft for him but he was stubborn to notice and he also had a thing for miss Pauling. You didn’t hate her, she was one of your close friends and also the only girl you can talk to when she had free time. But deep down, you were jealous, since Scout looked at you as one of the guys but when He sees her, it’s like he is looking at something new. This also made you feel down on how you look. Yes, you did wear pants, the red shirt and had the whole hunter look. But you wished one time someone looked at you like you were a beautiful flower or something.

Damn it, you were over thinking things again.

“Ay, dagger. Yer’ Here as well?” You looked over and blinked, seeing Sniper. Well duh, this was his nest after all. You nod and smiled, looking outside again. He sat across you and rested his back on the wooden wall, sipping his very strong coffee that you could smell it from where you were. His blue eyes looked at you through his dark orange shades, seeing you were looking at something interesting. “What ye’ lookin’ at?” He placed his mug down and went beside you, seeing you were looking at Scout that it made him scoff. “Scout again? Bloody hell, Dagger. Ya’ know there are other interestin’ things to look at~” He said, making you slightly chuckle.

Sniper knew about your crush. “I’m sorry, Sniper. I just can’t help myself..” You said and slightly looked at him, not knowing if he was looking at Scout or you. You looked forward again and lightly blushed, hoping he would move away from you.

“…Well ye’ should stop. His head is like a nut. Get with someone who likes ye’ for ye’~” He said, sounding a bit like a whisper which sent shivers down your spine. “…Like me..” He hugged you from behind, burying his head in your neck.

You gasped and blushed, Wanting to turn your head but your body froze. “S-Sniper-?”

He didn’t pull away, just breathing in your sweet smell which he loved. “Ye had no idea, did ye..?” He muttered “ay’ve been bloody crazy over ye for a long time now…Wantin’ to kiss ye’, touch ye’, make ye’ mine….But ya’ always talked about Scout an’ it drives me crazy..” You gasped again as you felt him lightly bit your neck. “Ye have any idea what ye did to me…Makin’ me touch myself in here an’ moaning yer name out..”

Your face was getting redder as he talked. You had no idea. Were you that stubborn. Wait a second.. “Sniper…I’m sorry..” You muttered, feeling him stiffen, worrying a bit. “Sorry I didn’t notice…God, I’m stupid..” You lightly chuckled. “I kept wondering why Scout didn’t notice me and how he wanted Miss Pauling and not me…But I didn’t realize that you wanted me, like I wanted Scout….Now I know how it feels..” You turned to him, cupping his face. “Forgive me, Sniper..I didn’t mean to make you feel down..”

His eyes softened as he looked at you, placing his large hand on top of yours. “I’ll forgive ye’…If ay’ can have a kiss..” He muttered. That took you a bit by surprised. You haven’t kissed anyone in a long time since being here. You swallowed and lightly licked your bottom lip, nodding slightly. Sniper cupped your face and kissed you softly, making a slight whimper come out of your throat.

Oh god, You were kissing Sniper! Was this really happening!? Or was this Spy doing a prank on you and wanted your booty!? It has happened before. You wrapped your arms round his neck and brought him close, making you sit on his lap. Being this close to him, made heat rise between your legs. “Mm..” The kiss was soft at first but it soon became needy and lustful, making you moan and him grunt. Fuck, this was hot. His hands were on your waist and made your body press against his as his tongue slipped between your lips. Your tongues danced along with each other, tasting the coffee and tobacco on his tongue.

You couldn’t help but buck against him, hearing him groan and getting tight in his pants. You soon both pulled away and panted, resting your foreheads against each other. This was only the beginning of this. You then slowly took off his shades, so you could see his eyes. They were Dark blue now, his pupils dilated and looking right at you as he was slowly getting his breathing back. You never realized how fucking hot he was. “…Hold fuck, Sniper..!” You pretty much attacked him with a kiss and went over his body, making him make a ‘Mmh!?’ Sound from his throat. His back rested on the floor, making his hat fall off and you straddling him.

“Mmm…Fuck, kitten. Ye’ really are horny, huh?” He raised a brow and lightly smirk, looking up at you as his hands slipped under your shirt.

“Hah…I have been here for too long without sex and you looking fucking hot makes me horny as hell, so sorry if I Want you to fuck me hard..” You said, sounding serious yet sexy as hell.

He laughed and grinned. “Kitten, ay’ have been here longer then ye have, so how do ye think I feel?” He asked, raising a brow. He moved his body up and took off your vest, then your red shirt. You did the same to him, taking off the straps as well. He was now shirtless, having a hairy muscular body. Oh god, you did have a thing for hairy guys.

He now went over your body and grinds up against you, making you gasp and moan. “Mm…ay’ luv’ when my kitten cries..” He grunted out deeply. He then placed kisses and bit marks on your neck, taking off your bra and tossed it aside.”Beautiful..” He muttered and grinned, leaning down and took one of your nipples in your mouth. You gasped and moaned, closing your eyes. Oh god, this was making you melt.

He rubbed your other breast, giving it a light pinch and pressed his thumb down. “O-Oh god..” You muttered and blushed, your nipples hardening against his touch. Sniper could smell you getting wet, having a nose of steel. He undid your belt and slides them off, tossing them aside. He grabbed one of your daggers and grinned slightly. “ay’ wonder how skilled ye’ are with yer’ hands..” he said, with lust in his throat. He then cut your underwear with your own dagger and spreading your legs, having a nice view of you. “Mmm..” He licked his lips and grinned. He Kissed your stomach and lowered his head, his face buried between your legs.

“S-Sni-” You gasped and blushed bright red, feeling his tongue licking against your clit. “O-Oh fu-!” You gasped and cried, resting your head back. “S-Sniper..!” You whined, running your finger through his hair. Your toes curled up as he’s eating you up, feeling your whole body heat up. He rubbed your thigh and moved it to your entrance, slowly slipping in two fingers. “Ah-! Y-yeah…Sniper..” You whined and gasped, lightly tugging his hair. You were getting wet from his simple touch. Damn it.

He started to Pump his fingers in and out as his tongue licked your clit, teasing the hell out of you. “Mmm..” Sniper’s pants were getting tighter, making it painful for him. His free hand undid his belt and tugged his zipper, letting it loose. He groaned and closed his eyes, feeling you grind against his face. His fingers spreads your walls, making you moan and cry.

Music to his ears.

“S-Sniper..” You cried, your breathing quickening. “F..Fuck me, P-Please..” You begged.

He pulled away and licked his lips, his eyes staring up at you. “What was that? ay’ couldn’t hear ye’..” He teased, his thumb rubbing your clit.

You gasped and bucked against his hand. “S-Sniper, Fill me with Y-Your-ah-Cock…God..I want Y-You inside me..!” You whimpered out, feeling your legs shaking.

He chuckles and pulled out his fingers, giving them a good lick. “Mmm…Alright…Now…Place yer’ hands on the window..” He grunted out. You looked up at him and blinked, looking a bit confused. “Now..” He lightly growled, sounding like an order. You moved your body up and placed your hands on the wooden window, seeing the view in front of you, your legs spread open. “Mmn…Nice..” Sniper went behind you and smirk, rubbing your breasts together.

You gasped and blushed, seeing Scout from afar. “S-Sniper, No…S-Scout will see…And maybe T-The oth-” You moaned, feeling his cock rub against you.

“ay’ don’t care…ay want him to know what he’s missing out..” He muttered against your ear, giving it a slight nibble. “Mm…An’ Ay’ want ye’ to watch him as ay’ fuck ye’ from behind…” He lightly groaned, getting into position before he thrusted inside. “Ah…Fuck, Dagger…Yer’ already clamping down..”

You gasped and moaned, trying to keep quiet. Scout and the others could hear you. “M-Mm…But…You’re S-So big..” You gripped the wooden window, feeling your legs shake but thank god you were on your knees. You then felt Sniper pull away and thrust back in. He was making it slow but hard. “Ah….Ah…Ahh..! S-Sniper…Fuck…” You lightly panted, seeing Scout being himself. You felt so embarrassed. All he had to do was turn and look up, seeing you getting fucked by Sniper. But deep down, it was kind of hot.

“Ah…Ngh…Bloody hell, Dagger….” Sniper grunted out, making his hips move faster. “Ngh..” He bit his bottom lip as he watched you, seeing you trying to hold your moans back. “Come on…Ay’ know ye want to cry out..” He leaned forward, getting in deeper. “Say my name…Shout it..” He then slapped your ass, making you cry.

“S-Sniper…!” You shut your eyes and panted, feeling him pulse inside your tight walls. You felt yourself going dizzy, hoping you don’t pass out from pleasure. “Ah..! S-Sniper..! Sniper~” You then cried, feeling him hit the right spot. “Ah! T-There..! Sniper!”

“Ah…Yer’ cunt is clamping down hard, Luv..Ngh…Fuckin’ hell, yes…ah..!” Sniper closed his eyes and panted, going balls deep inside you. You felt yourself getting tighter, your wetness dripping on the floor as his cock went so deep inside of you. “Ngh…Fuck…I’m going to cum, Luv…”

“Y-Yeah..! Yeah, Sniper! C-Cum! Cum inside me…M-make me yours..!” You cried, moaning each time he thrusted deep inside. You moved your head to the side and kissed him, moaning in his mouth. “Mm-! Mm-!” Saliva ran down your chin as your tongues fight over each other. Sniper’s hand went down and rubbed your clit, making you have fireworks inside your belly. “S-Sniper!!!”

“D-Dagger..!” Sniper groaned and thrusted in deep, making you climax and soon he came after. “Ah..!” He groaned, pulsing inside of you. You gasped and blushed, feeling his hot cum inside of you, some dripping on the floor.

~~~

You hummed and snuggled close to Sniper, your hand rubbing his hairy chest as you both rested on his bed. “Mmm…Kitten…Yer’ bloody amazing..” He purred out and smiled, his fingers rubbing the back of your head.

You smiled, placing a kiss on his chest. “Same as yourself, big guy..” You said, closing your eyes and smiled softly. You liked this time. Snuggling close to Sniper and hearing his heart beat softly.

“Hey…Kitten..?” You opened your eyes and looked up, blinking slightly. “Ay’ know this might sound stupid but…Are we…together..?” He muttered, rubbing the back of his neck. Was he blushing?

You chuckled and pecked his lips, giving him a sweet smile. “Of course, Sniper~”
>> No. 16232
Here you go! I hope you guys like~ Sorry if it sucks, first time doing a Team Fortress 2 fanfic~ :V

Here it is as well for...I dont know~ http://archiveofourown.org/works/3857239

and also, your name is Dagger since your weapon is knifes and stuff~

Enjoy!

.....

You were in Sniper’s nest, you mostly relaxed there when you wanted to be alone. You sipped your coffee and watched Scout outside as he was just running round and playing with his bat. You had a soft for him but he was stubborn to notice and he also had a thing for miss Pauling. You didn’t hate her, she was one of your close friends and also the only girl you can talk to when she had free time. But deep down, you were jealous, since Scout looked at you as one of the guys but when He sees her, it’s like he is looking at something new. This also made you feel down on how you look. Yes, you did wear pants, the red shirt and had the whole hunter look. But you wished one time someone looked at you like you were a beautiful flower or something.

Damn it, you were over thinking things again.

“Ay, dagger. Yer’ Here as well?” You looked over and blinked, seeing Sniper. Well duh, this was his nest after all. You nod and smiled, looking outside again. He sat across you and rested his back on the wooden wall, sipping his very strong coffee that you could smell it from where you were. His blue eyes looked at you through his dark orange shades, seeing you were looking at something interesting. “What ye’ lookin’ at?” He placed his mug down and went beside you, seeing you were looking at Scout that it made him scoff. “Scout again? Bloody hell, Dagger. Ya’ know there are other interestin’ things to look at~” He said, making you slightly chuckle.

Sniper knew about your crush. “I’m sorry, Sniper. I just can’t help myself..” You said and slightly looked at him, not knowing if he was looking at Scout or you. You looked forward again and lightly blushed, hoping he would move away from you.

“…Well ye’ should stop. His head is like a nut. Get with someone who likes ye’ for ye’~” He said, sounding a bit like a whisper which sent shivers down your spine. “…Like me..” He hugged you from behind, burying his head in your neck.

You gasped and blushed, Wanting to turn your head but your body froze. “S-Sniper-?”

He didn’t pull away, just breathing in your sweet smell which he loved. “Ye had no idea, did ye..?” He muttered “ay’ve been bloody crazy over ye for a long time now…Wantin’ to kiss ye’, touch ye’, make ye’ mine….But ya’ always talked about Scout an’ it drives me crazy..” You gasped again as you felt him lightly bit your neck. “Ye have any idea what ye did to me…Makin’ me touch myself in here an’ moaning yer name out..”

Your face was getting redder as he talked. You had no idea. Were you that stubborn. Wait a second.. “Sniper…I’m sorry..” You muttered, feeling him stiffen, worrying a bit. “Sorry I didn’t notice…God, I’m stupid..” You lightly chuckled. “I kept wondering why Scout didn’t notice me and how he wanted Miss Pauling and not me…But I didn’t realize that you wanted me, like I wanted Scout….Now I know how it feels..” You turned to him, cupping his face. “Forgive me, Sniper..I didn’t mean to make you feel down..”

His eyes softened as he looked at you, placing his large hand on top of yours. “I’ll forgive ye’…If ay’ can have a kiss..” He muttered. That took you a bit by surprised. You haven’t kissed anyone in a long time since being here. You swallowed and lightly licked your bottom lip, nodding slightly. Sniper cupped your face and kissed you softly, making a slight whimper come out of your throat.

Oh god, You were kissing Sniper! Was this really happening!? Or was this Spy doing a prank on you and wanted your booty!? It has happened before. You wrapped your arms round his neck and brought him close, making you sit on his lap. Being this close to him, made heat rise between your legs. “Mm..” The kiss was soft at first but it soon became needy and lustful, making you moan and him grunt. Fuck, this was hot. His hands were on your waist and made your body press against his as his tongue slipped between your lips. Your tongues danced along with each other, tasting the coffee and tobacco on his tongue.

You couldn’t help but buck against him, hearing him groan and getting tight in his pants. You soon both pulled away and panted, resting your foreheads against each other. This was only the beginning of this. You then slowly took off his shades, so you could see his eyes. They were Dark blue now, his pupils dilated and looking right at you as he was slowly getting his breathing back. You never realized how fucking hot he was. “…Hold fuck, Sniper..!” You pretty much attacked him with a kiss and went over his body, making him make a ‘Mmh!?’ Sound from his throat. His back rested on the floor, making his hat fall off and you straddling him.

“Mmm…Fuck, kitten. Ye’ really are horny, huh?” He raised a brow and lightly smirk, looking up at you as his hands slipped under your shirt.

“Hah…I have been here for too long without sex and you looking fucking hot makes me horny as hell, so sorry if I Want you to fuck me hard..” You said, sounding serious yet sexy as hell.

He laughed and grinned. “Kitten, ay’ have been here longer then ye have, so how do ye think I feel?” He asked, raising a brow. He moved his body up and took off your vest, then your red shirt. You did the same to him, taking off the straps as well. He was now shirtless, having a hairy muscular body. Oh god, you did have a thing for hairy guys.

He now went over your body and grinds up against you, making you gasp and moan. “Mm…ay’ luv’ when my kitten cries..” He grunted out deeply. He then placed kisses and bit marks on your neck, taking off your bra and tossed it aside.”Beautiful..” He muttered and grinned, leaning down and took one of your nipples in your mouth. You gasped and moaned, closing your eyes. Oh god, this was making you melt.

He rubbed your other breast, giving it a light pinch and pressed his thumb down. “O-Oh god..” You muttered and blushed, your nipples hardening against his touch. Sniper could smell you getting wet, having a nose of steel. He undid your belt and slides them off, tossing them aside. He grabbed one of your daggers and grinned slightly. “ay’ wonder how skilled ye’ are with yer’ hands..” he said, with lust in his throat. He then cut your underwear with your own dagger and spreading your legs, having a nice view of you. “Mmm..” He licked his lips and grinned. He Kissed your stomach and lowered his head, his face buried between your legs.

“S-Sni-” You gasped and blushed bright red, feeling his tongue licking against your clit. “O-Oh fu-!” You gasped and cried, resting your head back. “S-Sniper..!” You whined, running your finger through his hair. Your toes curled up as he’s eating you up, feeling your whole body heat up. He rubbed your thigh and moved it to your entrance, slowly slipping in two fingers. “Ah-! Y-yeah…Sniper..” You whined and gasped, lightly tugging his hair. You were getting wet from his simple touch. Damn it.

He started to Pump his fingers in and out as his tongue licked your clit, teasing the hell out of you. “Mmm..” Sniper’s pants were getting tighter, making it painful for him. His free hand undid his belt and tugged his zipper, letting it loose. He groaned and closed his eyes, feeling you grind against his face. His fingers spreads your walls, making you moan and cry.

Music to his ears.

“S-Sniper..” You cried, your breathing quickening. “F..Fuck me, P-Please..” You begged.

He pulled away and licked his lips, his eyes staring up at you. “What was that? ay’ couldn’t hear ye’..” He teased, his thumb rubbing your clit.

You gasped and bucked against his hand. “S-Sniper, Fill me with Y-Your-ah-Cock…God..I want Y-You inside me..!” You whimpered out, feeling your legs shaking.

He chuckles and pulled out his fingers, giving them a good lick. “Mmm…Alright…Now…Place yer’ hands on the window..” He grunted out. You looked up at him and blinked, looking a bit confused. “Now..” He lightly growled, sounding like an order. You moved your body up and placed your hands on the wooden window, seeing the view in front of you, your legs spread open. “Mmn…Nice..” Sniper went behind you and smirk, rubbing your breasts together.

You gasped and blushed, seeing Scout from afar. “S-Sniper, No…S-Scout will see…And maybe T-The oth-” You moaned, feeling his cock rub against you.

“ay’ don’t care…ay want him to know what he’s missing out..” He muttered against your ear, giving it a slight nibble. “Mm…An’ Ay’ want ye’ to watch him as ay’ fuck ye’ from behind…” He lightly groaned, getting into position before he thrusted inside. “Ah…Fuck, Dagger…Yer’ already clamping down..”

You gasped and moaned, trying to keep quiet. Scout and the others could hear you. “M-Mm…But…You’re S-So big..” You gripped the wooden window, feeling your legs shake but thank god you were on your knees. You then felt Sniper pull away and thrust back in. He was making it slow but hard. “Ah….Ah…Ahh..! S-Sniper…Fuck…” You lightly panted, seeing Scout being himself. You felt so embarrassed. All he had to do was turn and look up, seeing you getting fucked by Sniper. But deep down, it was kind of hot.

“Ah…Ngh…Bloody hell, Dagger….” Sniper grunted out, making his hips move faster. “Ngh..” He bit his bottom lip as he watched you, seeing you trying to hold your moans back. “Come on…Ay’ know ye want to cry out..” He leaned forward, getting in deeper. “Say my name…Shout it..” He then slapped your ass, making you cry.

“S-Sniper…!” You shut your eyes and panted, feeling him pulse inside your tight walls. You felt yourself going dizzy, hoping you don’t pass out from pleasure. “Ah..! S-Sniper..! Sniper~” You then cried, feeling him hit the right spot. “Ah! T-There..! Sniper!”

“Ah…Yer’ cunt is clamping down hard, Luv..Ngh…Fuckin’ hell, yes…ah..!” Sniper closed his eyes and panted, going balls deep inside you. You felt yourself getting tighter, your wetness dripping on the floor as his cock went so deep inside of you. “Ngh…Fuck…I’m going to cum, Luv…”

“Y-Yeah..! Yeah, Sniper! C-Cum! Cum inside me…M-make me yours..!” You cried, moaning each time he thrusted deep inside. You moved your head to the side and kissed him, moaning in his mouth. “Mm-! Mm-!” Saliva ran down your chin as your tongues fight over each other. Sniper’s hand went down and rubbed your clit, making you have fireworks inside your belly. “S-Sniper!!!”

“D-Dagger..!” Sniper groaned and thrusted in deep, making you climax and soon he came after. “Ah..!” He groaned, pulsing inside of you. You gasped and blushed, feeling his hot cum inside of you, some dripping on the floor.

~~~

You hummed and snuggled close to Sniper, your hand rubbing his hairy chest as you both rested on his bed. “Mmm…Kitten…Yer’ bloody amazing..” He purred out and smiled, his fingers rubbing the back of your head.

You smiled, placing a kiss on his chest. “Same as yourself, big guy..” You said, closing your eyes and smiled softly. You liked this time. Snuggling close to Sniper and hearing his heart beat softly.

“Hey…Kitten..?” You opened your eyes and looked up, blinking slightly. “Ay’ know this might sound stupid but…Are we…together..?” He muttered, rubbing the back of his neck. Was he blushing?

You chuckled and pecked his lips, giving him a sweet smile. “Of course, Sniper~”
>> No. 16234
>>208

Thanks so much for this! I've been waiting for a Sniper/you :D
Glad to see that people are still using this thread too c:
>> No. 16235
>>210
>>209

Please don't use smileys, I've seen people banned in the past for them.
>> No. 16236
>>210
>>211

Nah, as long as it's not excessive we're not gonna slap anyone for it. We've got wordfilters on the most annoying ones anyway.
>> No. 16239
>>209

Thank you for posting a story! I have also been waiting for someone to post something here.
>> No. 16242
Thank you guys! I'm writing another one but I don't know when it'll be finished. It's a Sniper x Reader x Engineer! Hope you guys are ready!!
>> No. 16246
An Engineer x Reader story I've been working on!
It's a multiple chapter plus my first tf2 fanfiction.

Wildflower chapter 1
He was a simple man, dragged into this mercenary business all because of his grandfather. It was a difficult business like any other one involving machinery but this job was different... he had to kill people. He never would have thought his life would have come to this or that, and he would have not much of a choice, but for what it's worth be believed that is was all worth it, protecting his family. Or at least that's what he told me. He had eleven science PhD's and nothing to show for it besides his dirty overalls and his missing hand. "For Science" or at least that's what he said the purpose of ditching it was. Science. It was always about science with him. Always carefully calculating. Tinkering madly with his gadgets. But that's what was so attractive about him. His drive, his passion. Behind those dingy goggles was a spark in his eye like no other.

Me? well.. I wasn't much of a mercenary. I was forced here because I had debt to pay and needed to work and this was the only thing I could get. Sure I could fight, but that's not what I was hired to do. I was just an errand runner, just a simple messenger who went into town to grab supplies and other things for the mercenaries on the team I lived with. The base was disgusting when I arrived. There were Sniper's urine.. jars.. on the counter top in the kitchen and grease and oil all over the kitchen table from Engineer bringing his work with him when he ate. Everyone else mostly stayed in their rooms on downtime except for Sniper who was never in the base but out in his van. From time to time he would come back inside to fill his thermos with hot coffee and clean his "#1 Sniper" mug.

Speaking of which, he had just come inside, I could see the cold on his breath as he walked in, his hands looked cold as ice. I looked up at him and down to his mug as I watched him pour himself a cup of the scalding black coffee.

"So if you're #1 Sniper, who's #2?" I asked, just joking with him.

"That bloke at the enemy base." he snickered, gesturing at the door towards their base.

I giggled at the thought of Blue Sniper drinking out of a "#2 Sniper" mug. My giggles must have traveled into the dining room cause soon after I noticed the Engineer get up and walk over to us.

"Soun's like someone's havin' quite a bit of a party on over here." He reached over me to the cupboard above to grab a mug for some coffee. "care eff'n i join yall?"

I smiled at him warmly and reached out my hand for his mug, offering to pour him some coffee. He surrendered the cup and I turned around to pour him some from the fresh pot I had made. Sniper turned and placed his coffee down after a quick sip.

"Goin back to the van" He snickered, "but i'm sure this Shelia would keep ya' comp'ny." He quickly took his cold hands and slid them down the collar of my shirt, wrapping them around my shoulders. I jumped out of my skin from the cold. I swatted him away angerly. He grabbed his thermous and mad a mad dash for the door as I threw a dishrag at him.

"And don't cha' come back tonight! I'm NOT makin' you any more coffee you dirty old man!" I yelled at him, my face red as the hot sun. He loved teasing me since he was the only one to have caught on to my crush on the Engineer and damn did he exploit it at every turn.

Engineer was laughing so hard he couldn't contain it anymore. The look on my face as I looked into the reflection of the toaster was disheveled. I tried to regain my composure but Engineer's laughter was just contagious. As I looked at myself in the toaster I started to laugh. Suddenly I could feel tears running down my cheeks as if I hadn't realized I had spilled the hot coffee I was pouring for Engineer all over one of my hands.

"Oh shoot!" I exclaimed, half laughing at myself and trying to hide the pain and hurt from him. If I let him worry he'll go soft on me.

I rinsed my hands under cold water and cleaned up the counter quickly, but Engineer looked extremely concerned. He had taken off his goggles to reveal his beautiful eyes as blue as the day filled with worry.

"Yer hands-" he started, but I interrupted him quickly so he couldn't question my behavior.

"-Are fine." I lied, the burning and stinging pain drowning out all my thoughts, "I've had worse, but i'll go downstairs and see Medic just in case."

I hustled out of the room, my back to hirted flowing for real now, and I knew he was still staring at me as I left, his gaze pulling at my heart.
>> No. 16248
Please continue your story! I need to see what happens!
>> No. 16262
Is there anyone out there with a story? It seems this place has been forgotten.
>> No. 16263
I would like to post my Soldier/Reader fic, warning, it's quite long. I really would love to get some feedback please...
>> No. 16264
I would like to post my Soldier/Reader fic, warning, it's quite long. I really would love to get some feedback please...
>> No. 16265
I would like to post my Soldier/Reader fic, warning, it's quite long. I really would love to get some feedback please...
>> No. 16266
I would like to post my Soldier/Reader fic, warning, it's quite long. I really would love to get some feedback please...
>> No. 16267
221
1. You don't need to ask permission.
2. You don't need to post four times.
>> No. 16268
>>218
Please do! We're all here to give you concrit, so don't worry about it.
>> No. 16269
I'm...not sure why that was posted four times, it was NOT my intention. Here it is, anyway, I used auditory phonetics for those characters blessed with gorgeous accents so I hope not but some may have trouble reading their dialogue.

He watched quietly as you made your way to the showers, fidgeting with the lid to the box of ammo he’d been doing inventory on. He’d averaged the amount of time you usually spent in there between twenty-six and thirty-four minutes, and set his watch in the middle at thirty. The moment the shower door locked, he made his way to your room. Looking up and down the hallway to be sure no one would see him, he let himself in and closed the door behind himself. Eyes scanning the small living space for his objective, he recognizes a dispensary bottle sitting on top of your three drawer dresser and makes his way over to pick it up. Reading the label, he verifies he’d found what he’d come for. It read: Spiced Honey Apple Pie. The first time he’d encountered the scent was the day he met you, found covered in blood and dying slowly in the red Teufort sand. Typically, he would have put an injured team mate out of their misery that far from the Medic’s station but he was inexplicably compelled to pick you up and carry you there after a short debate with himself. He could smell it on you through the blood as soon as he knelt down to lift you up, it was intoxicating. Since then it’s invaded his dreams, it caused him to experience lasting sensations of desire and, even more embarrassing, tranquility.

He was a mercenary, a Soldier no less, and women were just trouble, but every time you passed by it made his head spin in his helmet. He quickly ended the inner conflict when he decided he could prove to himself it was the product causing him turmoil and not you. He pushed down on the dispenser but it didn’t descend, to his frustration. He kept trying to push the button but it wouldn’t move. When he checked his watch and found he was already eight minutes into his mission, he became impatient, unscrewing the lid hastily. To his shock, the bottle erupted like a volcano under the hostile ministrations of his large hands, covering the one that held the bottle thoroughly. The smell caused a shiver to race down his spine but the apprehension of being caught now overwhelmed him. Screwing the lid back on, he set the bottle down, looking back over his shoulder at the door anxiously before looking back down at his hand which was coated in the rose-petal pink liquid. He didn’t want to just wipe it away, he felt like an addict, if he were an alcoholic and it were the only beer for a thousand miles he would have lapped it off the floor and spit out the shards of glass.

Looking back over his shoulder at the door again, he knelt down and opened the bottom drawer to your dresser, without taking his eyes off the handle, he grabbed the first thing his hand touched and began to carefully but quickly dry the other. It was a small, silk cloth with lace, by the way it had been “folded” he assumed it was a handkerchief, and while still under deep paranoia he kept his eyes on your door as he wiped the rest off of your dresser top and the bottle, erasing all evidence. He checked his watch: eighteen minutes gone. He looked down at the bottle and the dresser top to be sure they were clean and then checked the floor, satisfied he had done well enough covering his tracks he moved next to close your dresser drawer with his booted foot, but stopped when he glanced inside it from under his helmet, his face turning a deep shade of red. You had all of your ‘delicates’ in this drawer, thongs, panties, bras, in no particular order, but all visually appealing. The thought of you in any of these and nothing else caused his blush to migrate across the wide expanse of his neck and he let out a long whistle before shaking his head and kicking it shut. Then he looked down at the “handkerchief” and his heart nearly leapt out of his ribcage. It was a pair of your panties, they were red/blue, small, silk with gold lace and were now stained by the oil based lotion he abused them with.

“Damn it…” he cursed under his breath, checking his watch again. Twenty-one minutes. He needed to get out of there, fast. Pocketing the garment, he eased the door open, peeking out cautiously before quickly exiting the room and closing the door as it had been and heading off in the direction of the warehouse. The Engineer was at work as usual tinkering with his prototypes, whistling as he turned his wrench around a freshly greased bolt, content and at ease, until the Soldier’s bellowing growl caused his hand to slip, the wrench hitting his work bench with a loud ‘clang’. “HEY! TOY MAKER!” the Engineer frowned deeply, he didn’t take too kindly to being startled during the rare days the mercs had down time, especially so violently, and most especially by the Soldier. “Dang it, Soldier, hwat’s so gal darned important y’gotta shout fer?!” he grumbled back, wiping the sweat off the back of his neck with a towel as he made his way from around his mountain of spare parts. “I NEED A HAMMER.” He commanded firmly, causing his team mate to raise an eyebrow under his hard hat. “Hwat the Hell fer?”

The Soldier’s ever present scowl deepened, his teeth bared as his patience was tested. “I NEED IT TO BEAT PEOPLE WHO ASK STUPID QUESTIONS TO DEATH!” The Engineer scoffed, eyes rolling behind his goggles as he grabbed one from his toolbox, throwing it at the Soldier. “Jus’ don’t go fergettin’ where it come from, mister.” His hand flew up and he caught it without moving otherwise, exiting the garage with no further comment, leaving the Engineer scratching his head and wondering what the Soldier had planned for his hammer. Whatever it was, it wasn’t a lengthy project, because no later than thirteen minutes had passed before the Soldier was back, dropping the hammer gracelessly into the toolbox it originated from and marching back out. The Engineer watched him go before grabbing it out of the box again with his gloved hand, looking over it for blood or gray matter (or perhaps some more offensive production of organic life) and finding none. There was, however, a splinter of wood between the claw. Brushing it off, he set it back in the box and shook his head, returning to his invention but not without continuing to wonder.

It was only three days later that he would finally sate his curiosity. “Alright, which one of you PERVS stole my panties?! Was it YOU, Boston, huh, you little creep?!” glancing up from his coffee, the Engineer lifted both brows in surprise as he notices his female counterpart snatched the Scout up out of his seat by the front of his shirt and began shaking him. “What?! No, no, it wasn’t me! I swea’!” you threw him back into the chair and your eyes, which seemed to have an ominous sheen over them, scanned each of their faces like a LION choosing her prey. “What about you, Frog?! You some kinda sick freak, you like lace, does it make you feel pretty?!” Spy’s mouth fell open slightly, his cigarette falling out from between his lips and tumbling to the floor, the evidence of his offense to this accusation printed quite tangibly across what could be seen of his face. Trying to be the voice of reason, the Engineer stood and cleared his throat, and you fixated on him, your stance was pre-pounce. “Nao, let’s not get carried away. No one here would steal from ya, lil missy. ‘Specially nawt sum’n like ‘at.” You exploded. “Oh really?! They grew little arms and legs and crawled outta my drawer then walked outta the fort on their own whim?!” He held up his hands defensively and answered in a soothing tone. “Awl I’m sayin’ is y’mighta misplaced ‘em. Y’need any help lookin’?”

Your lip curled slightly, spitting back “I already LOOKED, they’re part of a set, I have the BRA with no PANTIES, they’re not ‘misplaced’, one of you SMELLY BARBARIANS took them and when I find out who I will BURN and replace ALL of your underwear with LEATHER THONG SPEEDO’S!!!” At that, you stormed out of the room, slamming the heavy iron door shut behind yourself. When the Texan looked around the room at his fellow team mates, he noticed they were doing the same, all appeared equally as stunned and bewildered. This made him more confident that you had no foundation for your suspicion, until he heard the back door shut behind him, when he looked and saw no one he realized someone had slipped out in a hurry and a quick inventory of his colleagues revealed that the only two people missing were you and the Soldier. Taking his coffee and the auto section of the newspaper, he left the kitchen, going back to his warehouse until later that afternoon, when the Soldier left the fort to run his exercises in the canyon just behind the RED/BLU base. When the Engineer got to his room, he had to let himself in, the door which was typically kept open was closed. His eyes fell immediately on the old footlocker at the end of his bed, surprised to see there was now a padlock on it. Brows bowing in displeasure, he grimaced.

“You no-good, dirty, low-down…” knowing the Soldier wouldn’t be back for a while, he pulled a pair of bolt-cutters from his tool belt, kneeling in front of the footlocker and popping the bar before opening it and looking inside, tossing it, he checks each pocket, every inner lining, even searching for evidence of a false bottom, but he didn’t find any ladies undergarments. “Huh…so why the lock suddenly…?” this must have been what he’d slipped out of the kitchen to do this morning. What was he hiding? Nothing in that old box but a couple wife-beaters, a few pairs of socks, an extra pair of boots, a couple RED/BLU issue uniforms and…several pairs of spangled boxers. It occurred to him that your threat had been to burn the culprits unmentionables and the thought of his all-American-undies burning must have horrified the Soldier. It still wasn’t enough evidence, he needed the genuine article if he was going to call any fouls. He was dumb, but not dumb enough to keep them on his person after this morning, the Engineer was confident he wasn’t WEARING them. Where’d he hide those damn things? He then recalled the previous day and the Soldier’s odd request for a hammer. He looked down at the planked floor and began scanning each board, but found none appeared to be disturbed.

He was running out of time. Moving the cot in a final effort, he found one board that, instead of having four nails, one in each corner, was affixed to the floor with three nails, two in the right corners and one in the left center, though there were holes in the corners on the left side where nails had been. “Got’cha.” The Engineer pulled his hammer from his tool belt and removed the right side nails, turning the plank on the center nail which acted as a pivot point to find a pair of badly stained, red lady’s underwear, your scent was all over them, it filled the room as soon as he opened the floor up. He made a face, assuming it was covered in spent arousal. “That stupid son of a bitch…” he grabbed your panties with his gloved hand, stuffing them in his pocket before heading to your room, knocking softly on the door. “Come in…” you answered, sighing as you sat up in bed. The Engineer entered your room sideways through the half open door, lingering there a moment. “Hey, y’all mind a little comp’ny?” you shook your head, inviting him in. “No, it’s ok. Listen, I’m sorry for snapping earlier. I’m sure they’re around somewhere, I really over reacted. I’m not used to staying with a bunch of men, so I guess I’m a little paranoid.” You sat up in your cot, crossing your legs as he moved to sit on the edge of your make-shift bed.

“Naw, I guess yer not. I found these under a floor board in the Soldier’s room. It, uh…looks like y’may wanna wash ‘em…or jus’ throw ‘em away…” He pulled them out, having enough courtesy not to toss them down on your bed, still under the impression that the Soldier had relieved himself all over them. When he looked up and saw the deep blush consuming your face, he colored a bit himself, looking away. “Look, I jus’ wanted t’bring these back t’ya. I can throw ‘em away if’n y’all want-…” you cut him off, taking them from his extended hand and shoving them under your pillow. “N-no, that’s ok. I’ll wash them. Thanks, I really appreciate you finding them for me.” He nodded, eying you with a sigh after a moment of contemplative silence. “….Don’t go layin’ inna th’dumb mule so rough, I don’t think he knows no better.” You nodded quietly and after an ensuing silence, he stood again. “Alright, well, if’n y’need anythin’ jus’ holler. ‘m right down the hall.” Nodding again, you offered a soft ‘thank you’ before he left. You pulled the panties out from under your pillow, still blushing deeply as you looked them over.

It looked like he used them to clean up after an affair with his hand but when you noticed the smell and held them to your face, you recognized the scent as that of your favorite lotion. Not only had he cleaned himself with your panties but he used your lotion to get himself off. You bit your bottom lip, and after some time and a good amount of consideration, you stood and exited your room without a sound, closing the door behind you and making your way along the corridor. When you pushed the unlocked bathroom door open, you saw the Soldier had returned from his daily workout and was standing in the shower corral with his back to you, apparently unaware of your presence as he continued to sing the national anthem loudly and off-key. You smiled to yourself as you leaned against the wall next to the towel rack and raked your eyes up and down what exposed flesh wasn’t hidden behind the saloon style door, a giggle escaping when he took his helmet off, let it become partly full of water before putting it back on. At this he went instantly silent and his head whipped around in your direction, though you could never see his eyes, you assumed that he was looking at you. Saying nothing at first, you only continued to smile, both quietly watching each other.

He wasn’t wearing his trademark scowl, seeming to realize he was in a compromising position, though his stance remained uninflected as he was clearly not shy. The silence lasted for what felt like a long time, since he was obviously waiting for you to state your business and as nothing witty had yet come to mind to open the discussion, you pulled your silk panties out of your pocket and dangled them by the hip strap on one finger. His reaction to this was dramatically different than the one to finding you creeping on him in the shower, his face became a deep red and he visibly cringed, turning in the shower to place both of his large hands on the door of it in case you were thinking of castrating him. His mouth came open simultaneously to begin stuttering around an explanation. “T-THAT WAS AN ACCIDENT-” you raised your free hand and to your surprise his mouth shut just as quickly, any excuse to get out of coming up with an excuse, you figured and dropped them to the floor before removing your hard hat and giving your head a shake to make your hair bounce around your shoulders enticingly. The Soldiers mouth fell open again slightly as you proceeded to unbuckle the shoulder straps to your overalls and watched them pool around your already bare feet. To his surprise you weren’t wearing any underwear and when you slid your collared t-shirt off, he discovered why.

You were wearing the red/blue silk and gold lace bra which matched the panties he’d taken from your room. As you slowly undressed you kept your eyes trained on him, biting into your bottom lip while a soft pink blush colored your cheeks. Placing a hand on the clasp to your bra which was at the front connecting both cups, you shed the final article of clothing with a soft pop that caused your round, heavy breasts to bounce upon release. You never forgot the day he saved you, your health gauge had been registering a quickly declining -7 and you were choking through generous mouthfuls of blood. You must have been a Hell of a sight, but you couldn’t believe he found you where you’d lain wedged between a warehouse wall and an avalanche of crates, the opposing teams Uber Heavy had annihilated your sentry which lay sparking and smoking nearby. When you looked up at him through the bright spots dancing across your vision he was tipping his helmet clad head and lifting his rocket launcher back on his shoulder, the business end aimed right between your eyes which were begging him to pull the trigger. You would have preferred to endure a MONTH of the nausea caused by RE-spawn than that slow death.
He had looked like he wanted to but grit his teeth and instead kneeled down and slid an arm under you, lifting you effortlessly and continuing to run ahead. When the 2 of you came upon the enemy Medic who was recharging his Medi gun, he shot a rocket between him and their Heavy, sending body parts and blood raining down over the both of you, to which he paid no mind. He dropped his now empty long range and picked up the Medic’s gun, when it lit up again, he pointed it on you, relieving your agony after moments and setting you back on your feet. You sighed breathlessly. “My hero…” Your face heated up a bit, and his response had been to grin stupidly through a modest flush, playfully brushing his fisted knuckles across your chin with his free hand, the other tossing the Medic’s weapon and pulling a shovel free of his utility belt. “Hang tough, Cupcake.” You nearly melted in your boots, knees buckling as you’d watched him run off towards the enemy base, whacking rival Soldiers’ heads backwards along the way.

“Do you remember the day we met…?” you asked as you swung your hips, walking slowly towards him, the tile floor cold under your bare toes. He nodded dumbly, mouth still clamped shut. His face was quickly growing a deeper shade of red the closer you got. When your arm extended and you brushed your hand over both of his, they slid off the shower doors and you pulled them open before stepping in with him. He inhaled deeply, slowly, the scent of spiced apples seemed to possess him to fold his hairy, pipe line arms around you and pull you against himself roughly. You gasped softly, placing your hands on his hairy, muscular chest and shivering as the hot water pelted your sensitive breasts and cascaded down your slender form. “I’ve wanted you since then…” you admitted and glanced up at him from under your lashes, beads of water catching on them and sending flecks of light into your eyes. His mouth fell open slightly again, stunned by how comely you looked, all wet and naked and sliding your smooth body against his. He felt his cock twitch and start to swell as you stood on your tip-toes and it nestled between your thighs, your sex hot against the base of his length.
“Nghh…” his hands slid down over your back to grab your ass, drawing a quiet moan past your lips as your arms folded around his thick neck. “Kiss me…” you commanded softly, caught off guard when he laced his fingers together behind you and picked you up, tilting his head and closing the bridge between your face and his. To your astonishment, he wasn’t only gentle but also passionate, despite his high grit five-o-clock shadow and firm jaw, you weakened at the kiss and wrapped your legs around his waist. Doing so pinned his now full erection between his groin and yours, the small amount of constriction was enough to make his powerful abs tighten with excitement. “Mmph.” He grunted against your lips, turning to back you up against the wall without putting you down, his cock throbbing as the cold tile caused your spine to arch and your body to press flush against his own. The strong arms of the Soldier supported you with no effort, which didn’t surprise you, but you were astounded by how good he was at kissing. You were getting dizzy from it.

He only broke away from you to tilt or tip his head a different way, occasionally his helmet would knock against your head but you didn’t mind, and you appreciated that he kept his tongue in his own mouth. You didn’t like sloppy kisses that left half your face coated in saliva. “Mmh.” Sighing into the kiss, you let your hands roam across his broad shoulders and down his muscular back. You’d had hundreds of dreams and thousands of day-dreams about being able to touch him so intimately and you were elated to have finally manufactured the courage to actually do so, the fact that he was reciprocating your attentions only enhanced your adulation. As his hips began to rock slowly against yours, he verbalized his sexual frustration with a low growl in his throat which sent ripples of excitement through you. Wanting desperately to alleviate that frustration, you drew back your right hand and slid it between your bodies, wrapping your fingers around his thick, solid erection. He broke the kiss when you did, speaking up reluctantly in his matter-of-fact tone “I do not have a contraceptive.” This made you laugh a bit and you kissed him again. “It’s ok.” After being reassured, he lifted you higher and admired your breasts while you lined him up at your entrance. Giving a slight nod as indication you wanted him to continue, your cheeks tinted again when he smiled up at you. “Brace yourself, sweetheart.” He warned, causing your blush to darken, but you did as you were told.

The Soldier started to slowly lower you onto his length, which was bigger than you’d imagined it would be and you flinched slightly at the intrusion. After he was fully sheathed inside you, he waited a moment, watching you to be sure you still wanted him and when you kissed him eagerly he almost grinned against your mouth. Removing himself almost completely before pushing back in, he blushed a bit as well at the slow moan he drew out of you. He’d been lusting after you for just as long as you had him, and would have approached you a lot sooner if he hadn’t gotten such bad advice. He’d been on another self-imposed mission, hiding outside on the roof and watching you change through your open window with a pair of binoculars. “Sweet Liberty…” he’d muttered to himself, adjusting his hard-on which had begun to strain against his pants. “You realize you look like a complete fool.” The Spy had appeared a few feet away, leaning against part of the building, chuckling as the Soldier jumped, startled, and dropped his binoculars with a loud ‘bang’ on the tin roof, which had caught your attention.

You had turned to look but he had dove backwards, hiding on the low point beyond your line of vision. You’d shrugged and continued changing. Watching you silently, the Spy smiled, de-activating his cloaking device for the second time and turning to look at the Soldier who was crouched down, his frown was cutting lines deep into his face and he’d grit his teeth angrily. “What the Hell do you want, crouton?!” The Soldier growled, using all his strength not to shout. “Only to humiliate you, mon ami.” He had lit one of his cigarettes, smirking mockingly at the American as he exhaled through his nose. “Your performance during missions has deteriorated, I see I was not incorrect in assuming why. I can assure you she isn’t interested.” Straightening up to look at the Frenchman from under the rim of his helmet, his frown deepened further. “How do you know?” He crossed his beefy arms. The Spy shook his head, chuckling. “I know everything about women.” He had answered confidently. “Do yourself a kindness, don’t embarrass yourself.” Arms falling back to his sides, the Soldier’s shoulders had slumped, encompassed by an overwhelming sensation of disappointment. Now, here you were, crawling all over him. He was going to rub it in Spy’s nose so hard later.

The Soldier glanced down at you, the hot water was quickly becoming cool and you shivered slightly in his arms, as much as he wanted to make it last he figured he’d have to be quick to keep you content. He lifted you up a bit again, pinning you with his muscular body to the wall and supporting you with one hand while the other reached up to remove his helmet, letting it fall to the wet floor before placing his hand back on your ass. Your eyes fluttered, you’d only seen him without the steel implement on a handful of rare occasions, but never so close. You didn’t have time to admire his pale blue eyes before he closed them, kissing you again and starting to rock his hips rhythmatically, giving a shudder himself at the soft moans you started making. He broke the kiss to rest his forehead on your shoulder, breathing in the scent you wore that always drove him wild. Grunting with primal urgency as you tightened around his cock, he sped up his pace, and you could see fireworks exploding behind your eyelids as they fell closed. “S-Solly…!”
When you called out for him, he grit his teeth, his hips now slamming into yours and fucking you into the wall. Though he wasn’t even within the vicinity of physical exhaustion, his breathing was coming in short panting breaths; it had been a while since he’d had a woman under him and he could feel a familiar heat rapidly coiling in his gut. The Soldier gave a low, deep growl of frustration, feeling that he had been waiting too long to have you for things to end so quickly but when you arched your back and cried softly “Right there…d-don’t stop…” he knew he had found your spot and pounded it hard, drawing both of you right to the very edge. Glancing up at you through hazy, lidded eyes, his face warmed a bit when you kissed him again with passion but also force and then brought your hands from his shoulders to his chest to run your fingers through the thick, dusty colored hair that shaded his bulging pectorals. He returned the kiss and slid his strong, calloused hands from your ass up along your sides to rest on your waist, feeling your core tightening under his fingers and around his throbbing erection, he knew you were almost there too.

A guttural groan from the Soldier caused you to open your eyes, his fingers digging into your hips. “Nngh…here it comes…” He muttered through deep, uneven breaths, but you barely heard him as your own ears seemed to fill with cotton, your body in rapture under his aggressive treatment. Suddenly, a searing white heat tore through you and you trembled with pleasure as you rode out your climax, gasping and digging your nails into his arms as you gripped them to steady yourself. He paid no mind to your vice grip, each of his finely toned muscles flexed as one final thrust buried his cock fully inside of you where he spilled his thick, warm mess all over your cervix before he slumped against you, spent and surprised at how tired his body felt after releasing so much pent up frustration. Relaxing your hold on him, you leaned in to place a kiss on his neck, smiling weakly as he carefully removed himself and set you down. Your legs were shaking, but you managed to stay on your feet, your cheeks lighting up when he simply left his hands at rest on your sides and stared down at you.

“….I really like you.” You breathlessly said, to finally break the building tension and silence. At this he grinned, his grip on you tightening once again. “I like you also.” Resisting the urge to laugh at his formal tone which he always used even when he was yelling, you stood up on your tip-toes and surprised him with another kiss, which he hastily returned. “Do you like me enough to keep me?” you asked while placing his helmet which he’d dropped back onto his head. “Affirmative.” He answered, slapping your ass playfully when you exited the shower stall to get some towels and giving you kind of a dopey smile as you threw one to him. “Hmm…” you smiled back, watching him wrap it around his waist before stepping out and making his way over to you, startled when he snatches your towel and folds you up inside it. “Let’s go, sunshine.” He said, suddenly scooping you up bridal style in his arms and heading for the door. Eyes widening, you placed a hand on his firm chest. “S-Soldier, wait, what about the-?!” As he kicked open the door, ignoring your warning, the rest of your team turned their eyes on the both of you; Having all been congregating in the common room drinking beer at that moment.

You had known that with Sol’s big mouth, you wouldn’t have been able to keep things quiet for long anyway.

I feel like the ending is shitty, but I was drinking when I finished this and I'd like some advice, pointers, criticisms before I re-write the last few paragraphs. I already know that it isn't uniform and the story line jumps from past tense to present tense, my strong suit is collaborative writing and this was all me so it didn't run as smoothly as I would have liked.

If you don't like it, I'm sorry for wasting your time.
>> No. 16270
I'm in the process of writing a Engineer/Reader fic, I'll be posting in parts if anyone is interested. Usually I leave the team color up for interpretation because I've known people who won't read certain stories based on that.
>> No. 16272
>>225

I'm not very good at criticism, so I'll just tell you that I loved the Soldier/You fic, especially Soldier's obsession with the reader's scent. My only problem with it, though, are the flashbacks near the end, since they kind of disrupt the story's flow. Maybe you can insert them somewhere else in the story.

I want to read more of what you have, so please post the Engineer story. That would certainly be interesting.
>> No. 16273
>>224

Some general pointers. Please don't take this the wrong way. Your story wasn't bad.

1. There are places where you shift tenses in the middle of sentences.
2. As you've pointed out in your author's note, the accents might be a bit hard to read, especially for those who don't have English as their first language.
3. When a different character starts to speak, please use a new paragraph.
4. I believe I've spotted some run-on sentences.
5. As anon >>226 mentioned, the flashbacks kind of disrupt the story flow.

Please do keep posting, though.
>> No. 16274
Thank you guys for the feedback, it's the first story I've completed solo (these tend to run better when I work with someone else, as a collaboration effort through RP) but my best writing comes with help. These are insightful tips, I hope future posts will be found more entertaining (and less lengthy in context).
>> No. 16310
I miss this thread. Does anyone have anything to contribute?
>> No. 16314
/afanfic/'s been pretty dead lately, and the last update on this thread was months ago, so I thought I'd give it a shot. If there's anything wrong with this fic, it's because this is the first I've ever posted and I'm still a bit inexperienced. Concrit is highly encouraged and much appreciated.

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It was a long way up the ladder, the sweltering heat doing nothing to to help, but you eventually found yourself at the entrance to the nest. Quickly fixing yourself as much as you could while holding on to a ladder a long way from the ground, you knocked twice on the hatch above you and pushed it open.

"Hey, Sniper. I'm gonna stay here a while, if that's okay with you," you said, climbing through the opening and shutting it behind you.

Sniper sat on a cot that had been pushed haphazardly to one side, polishing his rifle. He glanced at you through his shades and nodded, putting down the gun and taking a sip of decaf from his red #1 Sniper mug.

The nest was generally an uninteresting place: creaky floorboards that announced every step you took, unopened crates of ammunition scattered about, square windows propped open by makeshift planks of wood. It wasn't the best hangout, but you liked it there nonetheless. The nest was peaceful, a stark contrast to the stiff, mechanical gray of the base plagued by your insane teammates. It provided not only a sanctuary from the madness you called work, but also some time to think.

You sat on a crate marked fragile and attempted to read the book you brought along. It was impossible to concentrate, and before long your mind started wandering back to the reason you had started hanging out in the nest in the first place.

Sniper.

Sniper was a good teammate and a better friend, but there was more to it than just that. One smirk from him had the ability to reduce you, a tough, battle-hardened mercenary, to a shy schoolgirl with a crush, an embarrassing condition which you repeatedly denied to yourself and hid from everyone else. Still, it was true; you wanted him, perhaps even loved him, but you were professionals, and any romantic attachment would be a distraction from your team's main objectives. Besides, you knew he'd never see you that way, and while keeping your distance was a butterfly knife through the heart, rejection would have been a rocket launcher to the face.

By now your book lay forgotten on your lap as you absentmindedly watched Sniper clean his rifle, admiring the smooth movement of deft hands stroking the barrel in a vaguely suggestive manner, one you often encountered in your deepest fantasies. You noticed his fingers trembled slightly, and he looked uncomfortable, even nervous.

"What're you thinkin' of, mate?"

His sudden question jerked you back to the present, and you winced inwardly at the realization that he'd caught you staring. Your face burned, but you met him with what you hoped was a blank expression.

"Nothing. I was just watching you clean your gun," you said, telling half the truth.

He was silent, like he was contemplating something important, and you wondered whether he even heard you or not. You were exposed under Sniper's distracted gaze, and a few seconds trickled to an eternity. He sighed.

"I need to tell you something," he said.

Your heart beat in your chest like gunfire at a stalemate; fast, loud, and apprehensive.

"Um, d'you, uh, I just-" he stuttered, and buried his face in his hands. "Bloody hell."

"Sniper? Is there something wrong?" you asked, the worry evident in your voice.

Sniper looked up at you, considered something momentarily, then walked toward you, his his decision made. He took you by the hands, gently pulled you to your feet, and kissed you before he could change his mind.

The gunfire turned into a series of missiles going off one after the other, massive explosions of blinding color and confusion. You felt his arms wrapped around your waist; heard his intensified breathing; smelled his familiar scent of masculine fragrance, gunpowder, and coffee. The whole situation was unbelievable, but it was real. You were kissing Sniper.

You were kissing Sniper.

Holy shit.

"I didn't know how to tell you," he admitted, pulling away from you to catch his breath, "You know I'm not too good with other people. But I know I need to be with you because if I have to go through another day with you just sittin' there and torturin' me, I'd go mad."

You sighed sympathetically and pressed tender kisses up the side of his neck, trying to rid him of his shirt. "I want you, Sniper. Please."

You led him to the cot, and Sniper was on top of you in a second, sucking and licking every exposed bit of flesh. You undressed quickly and left your clothes strewn on the dusty wooden floor. You knew he didn't get to do this often with the clumsy way he touched you, but he tried his best as he traced the contours of your body; fondling your breasts; exploring the soft, scarred expanse of your back; lovingly stroking the wetness between your legs. He pushed a finger inside you, then two, and a rough moan escaped your lips when he hit just the right spot. You bucked your hips against his hand uncontrollably, and he withdrew his fingers just a few glorious strokes from climax.

Sniper pulled out a condom from one of the many pockets in his discarded vest, rolled it on, and positioned himself at your entrance. You exhaled sharply when he filled you, and muffled your moans on his neck with each thrust. His fingers found your clitoris, and you squirmed under his overwhelming touch.

"I love you. Fuckin' 'ell, I love you," he whispered in your ear, the patient, rhythmic rolling of his hips growing slowly more erratic.

At that moment, nothing mattered in the world; not your batshit crazy teammates, not the behemoths of corruption known as RED and BLU, not this futile war you fought in the middle of nowhere. There was only you and Sniper, and that's all that was important to you.

You came first, toes curling and hands grasping his shoulders tightly. Sniper fucked you through it, drawing out your orgasm as long as possible. A few more frantic thrusts, and he was spending his seed inside you. You were silent as he lay on top of you exhaustedly, his ragged heartbeat resonating through your skin.

After you both calmed down, Sniper pulled out of you awkwardly and rolled off the condom, disposing of it in a small metal bin by the cot. His tiredness was obvious, and he gave you a chaste kiss before finally succumbing to sleep.

You covered him with his blanket and watched the relaxed rise and fall of his chest for a moment before getting up to dress yourself. You gathered his clothes from all over the floor and left them neatly folded on a crate, his shades and akubra arranged on top of them.

Forgotten book now in hand, you lingered through the hatch and surveyed the nest. It was a different place to you now, yet it was the same. The floorboards still creaked, the crates were still scattered, and the windows still let in the dry desert wind; but you knew better than to believe it really was an uninteresting place. After all, there lay Sniper on his cot, naked under the sheets and satisfied.

You climbed down the ladder and shut the hatch quietly behind you.
>> No. 16317
>>230

Thanks so much for finally posting here! I've been waiting for somebody to update this thread for months.
I really enjoyed your story. For a first attempt it's really great! It perhaps felt a bit rushed, but it wasn't bad by any stretch. Great job!
>> No. 16318
>>231

Oh man, I know what you mean. I got tired of waiting for someone to update, so I decided to just try writing myself. I agree that it is rushed, but that's just impatience on my part, I guess. I've been thinking about writing another story, and hopefully, it'll be better.

By the way, thank you so much for the kind words. I was really worried about posting here, but I'm glad you like it.
>> No. 16347
>>229

I have posted a story here two years ago, and I have the next chapter still sitting in my folder (it's going to feature the RED Scout x Reader). I just didn't like how it turned out, which made me re-write the chapter several times. Although I would like to post it at some point.

I have other ideas for other TF2 Reader Inserts, but I have not had the interest in actually writing them...
>> No. 16373
This thread needs to be revived! It's far beyond dead and needs fresh work. Anyone got something laying around?

>>233
If you have any insert ideas I would love to read them. Especially ones with Heavy or Soilder.
>> No. 16374
This thread needs to be revived! It's far beyond dead and needs fresh work. Anyone got something laying around?

>>233
If you have any insert ideas I would love to read them. Especially ones with Heavy or Soilder.
>> No. 16375
I've got a query about the length of fics that can be posted here. I have a SniperxReader fic that's substantially longer than any of the fics I've posted here previously - 25 document pages. Will I be scolded for that?
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