>>7 It sounds scottish, but it's hard for me to read. It's my personal philosophy, when it comes to writing accents, that a little goes a long way. Dinnae's and Cannae's and Ye Ken's are great, but when it's thickly written like that, it's accurate, but it's taking me a lot of effort to "translate" it, which distracts me from what he's actually saying, so I have to reread it, which breaks up the flow of the writing. (Unless we're from the POV of someone who really can't understand Demo, then I think it would make sense to lay it on thick.) I think I read somewhere that we can pick up a lot about a person's accent through syntax alone? Scout's "We got a major problem over here," vs. Heavy's "We have big problem." I'm not sure though. Yeghh, Sorry for kind of ranting. I think what I'm trying to say, is that we know and love these characters, and we aren't going to forget what kind of accent they have, so you can afford to go a little easier on it.