Our definitions of 'poorly thought-out' differ immensely. This is probably one of the best pieces I've ever read. The characters, the scene, the scenario, they're all so fleshed-out and detailed they're practically tangible. The feelings are raw and real and alive, and it just... you sucked me in completely. It's gritty and honest and, just... I can't think of enough good things to say about this piece. Thank you. Thank you so very much.