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I just wanna make sure that the rules and formulas I recorded plugged in right; tell me, does this sound like a good Demoman (accurate in the accent without being difficult to read)?

(section taken from a fanfic I'm working on)

"Ah did nae mean ta do it!” Demo reiterated. “Th' wick jes'... burned short a wee sooner than expected. An' besides, tis' nae like Ah was aimin' at ye, tha bloody thing jes' took off!” He sighed and pinched the bridge of his nose, suddenly craving a good swig of scrumpy. “Look,” he continued, “Ah'm nae thrilled aboot tha situation m'self, jes' look a' this mess here!" He pointed over his shoulder to the billowing cloud of smoke behind him. "Mah lab's a wreck! Tha’ damn rocket sparked somethin’ fierce when it done took off an’ it lit up mah workshop like a roman-bloody-candle! D'ye have any idea how many volatile substances wos in there? There’s nae a stick ‘o dynamite left after tha’ blast!"