Wasn't really looking for anything in particular, so I missed a lot of stuff, but I'm a little confused. Each team only has one Medic, correct? I feel that it is implied, anyway. (This is what I'm assuming anyway, if not, then you can completely disregard this.) Anyway, in the second little paragraph between focus, you say that the BLU Medic just ubered the Heavy, but in the one before it and the one after it, he is dead. Also, be aware of formatting with italics, it throws the reader off a little if they have to remember that what they're reading shouldn't be italicized even though it is. Otherwise, I love your style and I really like where the story is going so far.