>>30 Thank you, anon. And, you're absolutely right. Run-on sentences, and the occasional short-clipped paragraphs are a stylistic thing for me. I absolutely hate pulling the "It's my ~style~" card after lambasting it so many times, myself, but... it's my style. There, I said it - please don't grab the pitchforks and torches, haha... What I like to shoot for in most of my fics is mood. I want the reader to feel as relaxed, or tense, or frantic as the narrator does, so, I write him/her as such. Still, there are errors in there, I know - so, please, crit away, channers!