I'm stunned right now. Which is a good thing. I wish I could give more concrete praise. The third rape really threw me for a loop. Not sure what I'd offer for the Heavy. I'm working on writing with him right now for "Double Feature", and I keep entertaining the thought of him living in a Anatevka-ian residential setting that gets completely wiped out, along with a sweetheart of his. (Named Ludmila, by the way.) If that helps you, take it and run. You've got a great head start.