I'm not sure what this is doing in the /fanfic/ section if it's going in the direction that you are implying. /afanfic/ is where the porn goes. Also I have a really hard time taking fics seriously when the inside of Sniper's van is written like it's some sort of magical TARDIS that is bigger on the inside than on the outside. A full-sized heart-shaped bed would not fit into the back of a pick-up truck, let alone a full-sized heart-shaped bed, a hi-fi, a table, a headboard, and the entire ceiling mirrored, no matter how many laws of porn you invoke. It takes me right out of it, sorry.