Overall, I think this is great. There are bits and pieces I will point out to you, however, that may yield negative reviews. The first one, are the characters' accents. As many people have said before, the readers know these characters so well, that the accents in the work aren't necessary, and hold back the reader from reading naturally. The second one is the German conjugation of "Ich fand es!" I'm no German speaker, but I don't think that's correct. I'd love if an honest-to-goodness speaker showed up and kicked my ass at my piddly three year of German, but I prefer saying "Ich habe es gefunden!" Correct me if I'm wrong. Regardless- Medic is written delightfully in-character, and I feel Sniper is too. But mostly Medic. Fun idea- I'm wondering where you go with it! Do continue!