Yes, you saged right :) But I forgot to tell you one thing. I noticed that several lines that were italicised for emphasis in the ff.net version of your fic are just normal text in this version. Here in the Chan, you can't just copy-and-paste bold and italic text from the .doc file; in order to make a line appear as bold or italic, you have to write it as [+b]text[+/b] or [+i]text[+/i] (without the +) It's not a huge deal, but careful use of italics in dialogues and inner monologues can help better convey tone and emotions. I remember you did a good job with it, but the error in formatting makes it seem like you didn't bother.