See, this was well worth posting! Solid sentence structure and dialogue, good story arc, believable characterisations. I don't feel that the OCs are *too* original, if you know what I mean. Yes, they are named, and yes, you've given them backstories, but the backstories fit well with the known facts of the established characters, and I have to admit that names are easier than just writing "Spy this, Sniper that" all the time. The one critique I have on this story is that it's not in the /afic thread. Seriously, how are we going to see them resolve these seething tensions, if not by fucking one another blind?