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...Goddammit. I knew I forgot something. I'm such a damn failure sometimes.

Screw it. I'll have them discuss it more in the next chapter. I was initially planning to not have her react that much at all, considering that she and the Spy have been having an affair for decades. Between all the things that had happened to her that day, seeing a younger Spy probably wouldn't have flipped her out too much.

I would delete the chapter and repost it, but frankly, not much changed over all. In other publications, I changed the dialogue where they meet to this:

They both blurted, "What are you doing here?"

"Came here ta save yer ass. Got kidnapped. Lost my shoes. Met up with yer coworkers. You?" The Scout's mother asked.

The Spy smirked. "Mostly ze same. However, I still have my shoes. New face, too."

"Eh, I've seen it before. Been twenty-five years, though," the Scout's mother teased. She pointed towards the direction that the caravan had headed. "Dat Marian 'n her group?"