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OMG! I was tentative at first but this newest chapter has me bright eyed and bushy tailed for the next one!

I LOVE your Engineer and Soldier. They're so casual and in character and realistic. Soldier is humorously rough without being too over the top or extremely abrasive. Engineer is sensible, a little conceited without meaning to be, and gentle without being a doormat. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I want more and I also hope you decide to write more with these two or anyone! I mean, I just have a feeling, judging from Spy and the disguises, that you'd write a fantastic story with the others.

This has seriously been a treat. Only thing I can think to mention is that I noticed a small typo but that was it.

while the doppelganger did a few some lewd gestures.

I hope you manage to finish this by or on or a little after Halloween! It would be beautifully fitting but not at all necessary, as long as it is finished. 8)