Wow, the ending almost made me cry. It is gorgeous and just so sweet. I'll be honest, I have only really been reading the Soldier/Engineer parts (sorry). That said, I am loving it. The way you make it continue on and on, what events are taking place to reach this moment, it is not rushed. However, it may just be me, but it seems to have dragged out a little bit too long. Like I said, it may just be me, and I want to see the relationship happen, which is next I imagine? Your skills in writing is also done well. Description-wise, what words you use, it's all good. I hope to see more soon as the suspense is killing me. Keep up the good work.