I fall into his arms to be kissed, held. After kissing me, he lays his head upon my shoulder, content within the circle of my arms. This line is a little confusing. Spy is being held, Sniper is in Spy's arms? It's possible they are hugging each other, but the next paragraph explicitly says that Spy is the one in the typical male position. Pity the 2 Spies and the BLU Sniper are gone. I like your Spy and Sniper, but your secondary characters are very interesting as well and offered more varied character interactions. Speaking of secondary characters... It has been a while and nobody has claimed my prompt about the shell-shocked Spy, that prompt I posted in this thread (>>14 and >>20) and in the previous now-autosaged Request Thread. Would you consider writing it? I had asked your permission to take the general idea, but the character himself is yours in the first place.