According to the captcha, I am 'being ngleed' right now, which is pretty much accurate. I really appreciate the comments. >>81 Oh my god, right? I can say that, because it's not mine. I stole it from Nabokov: A normal man given a group photograph of school girls or Girl Scouts and asked to point out the comeliest one will not necessarily choose the nymphet among them. You have to be an artist and a madman, a creature of infinite melancholy, with a bubble of hot poison in your loins and a super-voluptuous flame permanently aglow in your subtle spine (oh, how you have to cringe and hide!), in order to discern at once, by ineffable signs— the slightly feline outline of a cheekbone, the slenderness of a downy limb, and other indices which despair and shame and tears of tenderness forbid me to tabulate—the little deadly demon among the wholesome children; she stands unrecognized by them and unconscious herself of her fantastic power. >>83 Now THAT is feedback you don't hear much around these parts, and I find it refreshing. You know what? This started as a sweet n easy fuck story with a gory gimmick, but around Part IV I think something in my brain snapped and I started getting all these...plot ideas. So many...too many for this one story, actually. So now it is a long and grueling fuck story with a whole gory storyline. As an aside, Tim, would you be willing to contact me off the boards to answer some questions I have? I'm writing a thesis deconstruction of feminism in the TF2 fandom and I have always, always wanted to get the perspective of male fans, particularly gay male fans. These next few chapters might get weird, everyone. Buckle up and take your protein pills.