Op, never mind the upper reviews. This is a fanfiction, not all fics must have to do with the original story, that's why they are fanfics: made by fans, for fans. “Very little characterization†what the hell are you talking about? I’ve read tf2 fics and they never have any characterization; want to know why? Because everyone knows how the characters look like, jeez. Oh and by the way, “sunshineâ€, you seem to be a bit…well, ignorant? I guess you don’t read too many books to say something like <start by "using quotations when someone is talking."> using Ҡand – are both fine, you should really read more books hon. So never mind this jelly~ reviews, keep writing your story