The situation- two Scouts struggling on Spy's lap- is interesting. However, I think you need to work on the Spy's characterisation more. Calling his teammates "brainless ditchwater," mais oui. However, he doesn't really seem like the kind of man who would say, or even think, "Yeah" or "Oh, wow." For one thing, his internal monologue is probably in his native language, for another, no-one but beatniks and filthy hippies said "yeah" or "wow" in 1968.