I'm enjoying this (especially the overwrought fem!spy; it's something I could just about see the canon spy doing). I have a minor criticism that I'm afraid of wording incorrectly, though: I do think that, overall, characterization and description was a bit rushed. That, and the whole "person A is introduced and leaves, the person B and ditto with person C". I dunno, it feels a bit inorganic (?) for introductions to work in such a way. It's nothing that stopped me from enjoying the work overall, though, so please don't take offense (besides, with my former "critique", applying the latter might make everything too wordy...). Anyway, keep up the good work and have a good day!