Uh, I'm not quite sure what just happened at the end of the first part. It's way too confusing with all the pronouns. I get spy is in disguise, but you refer to him as 'she' and then later as 'he' and then 'she' again and it's hard to discern who exactly is who at the end. Also i can't tell who exactly entered, from where. I thought Spy was in the living room? You also keep switching point of views, which is definitely not a good thing to do in such a short story, although I can't think of any other way to make things less confusing... This is just a really confusing read right now...