Ah yeah, this was pretty good. I enjoyed reading it. In particular, I'd like to compliment you on your use of sensory descriptions. Whether it was his dream of Paris in the beginning of the chapter, or him throwing up at the end, I was able to get a good feel for what he was experiencing, and this is something that is often lacking in even well-written stories. To hear what the characters hear, or taste, or smell... I always want more of this. You did well. I'm also glad that this wasn't a one-shot. The first chapter wouldn't have worked so well if that's all we got, so I'm pleased to see this additional content. In addition to all the immersion descriptions, you also did a fine job of building up Spy's personality and giving us a look not just at who he is, but also what he's done with his life, and what he has been through. As impossible as his tentaspy-situation is, you've made him all the more real for us. As for critique, one thing grabbed my attention: you say "apartment" when I think you meant "department". Also, and this is just my personal opinion, but I think using a phrase like "cry-athon" kind of took away from the sadness of the scene, as if you were making light of his suffering. I'd replace that with something a little less casual. Hope to see more soon!