EggWhites, I honestly have not enjoyed a dark a/fic like this in a very long time. I think the internal monologue that you have Pyro go through is perfectly cerebral for someone who is being consistently traumatized. Your ability to show vs. tell what is going on astounds me and has me shaking out of joy and fear for Pyro time and time again. The relationship between Medic and Pyro is a perfect mix of endearing and despicable. The inherent malice in all the classes is everything I'd hope for in this type of fic. And most of all, despite the tone you still encourage the reader to cheer for the abused Fire-starter. Your ability to story tell beyond smut has made me care about Pyro. I hope you do not become dissuaded and are able to continue on in this story; you have my rapt attention. Sincerely, Some Anon type person.