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Definitely still reading :)

I just wanted to wait until I had something substantial to say before commenting again. There is just so many times I can say "I liked this chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one!" without starting to sound like a parrot :P

I did have a nitpick about one of the previous chapters. BLU Spy took Sniper's weapons away after drugging him, but later when BLU Spy went invisible Sniper got ready to attack him with his kukri. I think it would read better if you added at least a throwaway line about BLU Spy reluctantly giving Sniper his weapons back. But since it's not really a plothole or anything (BLU Spy never took Scout's weapons away, and Sniper would be useless without his weapons, so it's easy to imagine that BLU Spy simply gave Sniper his weapons back "offscreen") I didn't mention it before.

Speaking of BLU Spy, he is quickly becoming my favourite character. He is really entertaining.

I'm very happy to see that RED Spy is alive and well. I'm very curious to see his future interactions with Sniper and Engineer. His sacrificing his life (for good, as far as he knew) for Sniper, plus the implication that he may actually be in love with Sniper rather than simply lusting after him, plus the fact that Sniper willingly cheated on Engineer (even if it was only a handjob) while Engineer appeared to wish he could cheat on Sniper with Soldier... All of that could make for some seriously fantastic drama! I'm really looking forward to their meeting.

[strike]Just go poly, guys! And invite BLU Spy while you are at it![]