There isn't really a motive for this anymore beyond unfolding the plot. I'm just trying to get the ideas out of my head. If that means it's just some kind of fucked up porn, then that's okay with me. I want it out of my head (but I want to entertain someone, even if it's just one person, at the same time). I'm really working hard on this, harder than I have EVER worked on any kind of fanfiction, and it feels like not many people are getting it. Should I just stop posting this? Would someone be willing to tell me what needs to be different? Thanks.