I'm sorry but I'll have to be a little grammar nazi over the French you've used in the text. Please forgive me! French people don't say "que" instead of "what" or other one-word exclamations, it's the Spanish who do that (I guess). In French que is merged into larger sentences (such as "qu'est-ce que c'est?" which means "what is that?"). "Quoi?" on the other hand is used more as a stand-alone, it means "what?". And also I don't know if you intentionally misspelled "sil vu plait", the correct way of writing it is "s'il vous plaît". But now that that's out of the way I can congratulate you on writing a deliciously kinky and enjoyable fic. The aussie slang didn't bother me one bit, the characters were really IC. Good job!