Thank you for the exhaustive review Dove! Hehe, I love your work, so its a pleasure to take a review from someone whom I enjoy. Yes, as I mentioned above, I did have a bit more to this, but somewhere along the lines it vanished (which is strangely not that abnormal for me - I have a very very bad habit of editing my work on the fly so I end up changing it quite frequently). Originally, there was a part (somewhere in the first bit) that was about frequent losses but I must have either edited it out or changed it entirely. Meanwhile, where ever that went is a mystery even to me - its in one of the saves but not another. So, after posting, and sleeping, I think it may get a few more paragraphs to try and polish off the end. Something Medic-y maybe? Or at least try and attempt some fall out from their actions. Im not sure. I will know though tonight because I think about these things at work (Im surprised people don't find strange notes around since I usually doodle when I think to sort things out) Strangely enough, a broken rib (or suspected) hurts like hell depending where the break is. However, this is from second hand experience, and he told me that it hurts only if the break is more frontal. Or if it punctures a lung or something. As long as you spread your weight and don't cough, its not so bad. Accents I am quite terrible at! I will admit a huge weakness for them as I generally have issues with actually hearing them, let alone being able to write them. And when I try writing em, I usually end up fixing them back to something rather more normalised because, well, I see them as frivolous. Plus, I usually decode that part in my head And the strange part is that this one was never supposed to be finished. It started life as an idea someone seeded in my head. So I never really thought as much about it as I probably should, or normally would. So it went from a vague idea to basic structure in a few hours to this in probably 3. It missed the balance check (my partner is now drafted to read this tripe). Now, I am thinking of maybe writing just a few more paragraphs to make it Meanwhile, the Engineer is my class on TF2. Strangely enough, I seem to empathise with him quite a lot. Which, in my mind (nowadays is quite a scary place) makes him the easiest to write for. Though, being an Aussie, you would think Sniper but he is faux aussie. Digressing... Anyway, time for my morning dribble to be over - I thank you excessively huge amounts for the review - I cannot improve if I don't know I need to, and to give me the information Completely off topic - why do all my captchas suck? sselecl Bm-1?