>>2 I'm glad you liked it! It's funny you should mention that because I did choose second person narrative with the hopes that it would come off as a bit more "personal" to the reader... like the pseudo-incest would hopefully be easier to swallow, in a manner of speaking! it is hard though, I was worried it would sound awkward. Thank you for the comment! >>3 I'm definitely considering adding more, I write very slowly though heh. >>4 Definitely agree that there needs to be more scout's mom in fanfiction! Thank you thank you for your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed >>5 woohoo! I'm relieved that you liked it, I was worried I wasn't specific enough to your prompt and it might be kind of a let down haha. Thank YOU for thinking up such an awesome/inspiring prompt!