haha I'm gonna have to agree with the foreskin thing…I don't read that much in fics and unf...there just something about it. more of this. I also like how you made tentaspy short. That makes a whole lot more sense to me. (albeit a little too cute for my tastes - he should be eating people haha) And I dig the POV from scout and the whole jealousy thing. (lets face it scout - it WAS jealousy) Great job sheeps!