This fic is one of the best TF2 ones I've read! I really hope you write at least a little more, as it's kind of finished at a sudden halt. However, this is obviously up to you. :) You've done a fine job on writing it, with just how it's been written, how things are described and said. I am too suprised with the lack of comments... maybe give it some more time. ;) Good work!