I like dub-con and dominant Engineer as much as anyone, and you lay down a solid sentence, Maelgwyn. However, I have a couple of criticisms: First, the Spy's concussion at the beginning of this. It's kind of a cheap cheat to get two characters in bed, and it is unrealistic, even for porn. I've had kinky sex, and I've had cranial trauma, and I wouldn't want to combine the two. Given the nauseating splitting headache that comes with concussions, it'd be impossible for the Spy to get into sex. The only way to make this realistic would have been to have Spy dry-heaving as Engineer raped him. Just not my kink, and I don't think it's yours. Also, the entire line "His rectum was clenching and unclenching rhythmically to try and milk the seed from my hard wrench. It reminded me of the farm at home, and of chores of my childhood" made me wonder if I'd been suckered by a trollfic. Anatomical terms don't usually work in porn, and combining them with coy slang just makes it silly, not hot, and I don't even want to KNOW what kind of chores Engie was gettin' up to out on the farm. Step away from them sheep, boy. All that having been said, this isn't bad for a speedwrite, and we can always use more authors around here. If you want me to beta-read for you next time, I certainly will.