>>36 Most everything about this fic screams inexperienced writer. There's nothing wrong with that, of course, but I encourage any new writers to run their work past a beta before publishing it. No way to improve if you aren't willing to look for concrit! That being said, I love this thread and the gratuitous amounts of fantastic Medic/You that's been written before. I'd just really like to see a Sniper/You fic that doesn't pin him as a creepy rapist for a change. >>26 It's a mite big for a repost, would anyone mind if I just left a link or should I copypasta to the thread...?