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That was an excellent use of different POVs. It's a single series of events, but it reads completely different depending on whether you go with Sniper's pov ("I've been an understandably paranoid and probably self-hating closeted homosexual for so long and this guy, whose job it is to uncover secrets, said he was going to do something terrible to me and then he kissed me! Clearly that means that he has found out what I am, which could get me fired or arrested or worse, and is now taunting me and insinuating I'm not a real man!") or with Spy's pov ("I have to make him detest me somehow, and since homosexuality is widely considered a vile unforgivable abomination if I kiss him then he'll surely find me loathesome and disgusting! Ah-ah! Indeed he is reacting with anger and hate, my plan was a complete success! I will now claim that a real man like him should want to kill a pervert like me, so we can go back to being enemies!").

I've actually read this chapter several times, sometimes imagining it from Sniper's pov and other times imagining it from Spy's, and it really works great.